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LunaticSnivy — Out of Rythem

Published: 2012-07-14 18:56:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 368; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 2
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Description EDIT: Fixed eyes, shading slightly darker, shines on what was needed.



This took me awhile. But it was worth it in the end. Rythem got himself into a very rough fight with a bounty hunter of some sort. Badly damaged, and verge of collapsing. Well, when his eyes lose it's shine. Another Rythem comes out, ready to kill.

You can say this is like a dark half of him. Well, I like on the fur shading I did on him, especially the ripped & tathered jeans, but most of all: His eyes! Perfect if ya ask me~!

Rythem (c)
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LunaticSnivy In reply to ??? [2013-04-26 17:40:42 +0000 UTC]

Rythem: *panting heavily, looking upward with the lust for blood* "....hah....hah.....Well, this is a surprise.... I was hoping for you to not see me like this..."

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-26 17:43:59 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: "...Sugah...what happened t' ya? Y'all look hurt!"

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-26 17:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Rythem: "It's nothing.... Apparently some punk decide to fight me because I was in his area. Trust me Dimaza, I been through alot worse."

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-26 19:57:54 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: *takes one small step closer to Rythem* ".....Y'all sure sound different... Are y'all sure that y'all are okay..?"

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-26 20:45:38 +0000 UTC]

*Rythem meekly nods*

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-26 20:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: *takes another step closer, then stops; looks at Rythem's eyes, then takes two steps back* "...Y-Y'all are lookin' very scary, Rythem... A-A-Ah'm feelin' kinda afraid right now..."

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-26 21:32:51 +0000 UTC]

Rythem: "...Sorry..." *his eyes get back that shine and his voice is back to normal* "...I'm sorry Dimaza, hun...." *falls to his knees and passes out*

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-26 22:35:04 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: "!!" *dashes forward and catches Rythem as he passes out; sits down on her knees and rests Rythem's head on her lap* "Rythem? Rythem?! Rythem!!" *eyes widen* "...Oh, mah stars! What am Ah gonna do?!"

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-26 22:53:55 +0000 UTC]

*Rythem is still unconscious, but still breathing*

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-26 23:02:05 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: "!!" *digs into her inner vest pocket and pulls out her Freedom Fighter communicator* "Ah'm gonna need help!" *presses the red button* "Hello? Anyone, come in! This is Dimaza callin'! Anyone, please respond!"

*static*

Dimaza: "Someone, PLEASE come in! Ah need help, like, right now!"

*static, then someone answers*

T.Ruby: "Ruby here, Dimaza! What's wrong?""

Dimaza: "Ruby! Oh, thank the Chaos above! Listen, sugah, Ah need some serious help! Rythem's hurt and he just passed out!"

T.Ruby: "Where are you, D?"

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 00:09:59 +0000 UTC]

*Rythem sub-consciously whispers Dimaza's name silently*

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 00:20:10 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: "!!" *barely made out what Rythem sub-consciously whispered; keeping the red button pressed unintentionally* "Rythem! Rythem, sugah, can y'all hear me?!"

T.Ruby: "Dimaza? Dimaza, what just happened?!"

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 00:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Rythem *sub-consciously whispers* "...Di...maza.... I'm.......sorry....."

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 00:34:07 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: "Rythem!! Stay with me, sugah! Ah know y'all will pull through!" *talks into the communicator* "Ruby-girl, Ah don't know where we are! Get Kilo t' track the signal an' git ovah here now! An' bring an ambulance while y'all are at it!! HURRY!!"

T.Ruby: "Dimaza, calm down! Kilo's tracking your signal and Kai's calling for an ambulance as we speak! Whatever happens, just stay calm, don't leave Rythem alone, and keep your communicator online so we can trace the signal as we go! We'll be there soon!"

Dimaza: "Oh, please hurry, Ruby-girl!!" *looks down at Rythem, fearing for his life*

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 00:38:58 +0000 UTC]

*Rythem breathing is slow but calm, like he's resting*

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 00:49:02 +0000 UTC]

Kai: *over the communicator* "Dimaza, this is Kai. Do you read me?"

Dimaza: "Loud and clear, Kai..."

Kai: "I've just contacted the hospital and they are willing to follow us as soon as Kilo's gotten your signal. Until he's locked on to it, we'll have to keep out communications online. In the meantime, an ambulance is on its way here and it'll be ready once we have your signal."

Dimaza: "Ah hope sugah-fox gits the signal soon. Ah'm really worried for Rythem..."

Kai: "I know, D... I know..."

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 00:51:05 +0000 UTC]

*Rythem attempts to opens his eyes*

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 01:02:11 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: "!!" *notices Rythem attempting to open his eyes; places her hand gently and smoothly on his cheek* "Rythem...don't. Save yer strength, sugah. Help is on its way..." *bends down as far as she can, then gives him a little kiss on his nose*

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 01:08:20 +0000 UTC]

*smiles weakly and nods. He closes his eyes, as told*

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 02:28:33 +0000 UTC]

T.Kilo: *over the communicator* "Dimaza? It's Kilo. Do you read me?"

Dimaza: "Loud and clear, sugah-fox..."

T.Kilo: "Good. Listen, I've just locked on to your signal, and you two aren't too far from the boarding house. So as soon as the ambulance gets here, we'll be on our way soon, okay? Just remember to keep your communications online until we get there!"

Dimaza: "Got it, sugah-fox. Please hurry..."

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 11:46:29 +0000 UTC]

*Now Rythem rests alittle*

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 15:25:04 +0000 UTC]

*minutes later...*

T.Kilo: *over communicator* "Dimaza, it's Kilo again! Do you read?"

Dimaza: "Loud and clear."

T.Kilo: "Listen, the ambulance just arrived and we're on our way to where you and Rythem are. Judging by the signal, we should be there in a few minutes. How's Rythem holding up?"

Dimaza: "...He's restin' right now, sugah. But he still looks pretty weak..."

T.Kilo: "Well, hang tight. We're leaving now!"

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 15:37:21 +0000 UTC]

Rythem: ".........thanks for.... the help........."

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 19:18:58 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: *pulls Rythem up closer to herself, then wraps her arms around his body* "...Don' mention it, Rythem. Ah'd do anythin' fo' you..." *gives him a peck on the cheek, then speaks in a soothing and caring tone* "...Now, please, be quiet and rest. Help will be here soon..."

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 19:49:52 +0000 UTC]

Rythem: "....Alright...."

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 20:07:58 +0000 UTC]

*Dimaza smiles, then strokes Rythem's hair while waiting for help to arrive*

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 20:12:14 +0000 UTC]

*Rythem lets himself rest.*

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 20:20:24 +0000 UTC]

*about 16 minutes later...*

*Kilo, Ruby, and Kai fly down on their Extreme Gear, followed by an ambulance; all land near where Dimaza and Rythem are at*

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 20:23:45 +0000 UTC]

*Rythem is sleeping peacefully, breathing quietly*

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 20:32:34 +0000 UTC]

T.Kilo: *hops off his hover board* "There they are!"

*Ruby and Kai get off of their Gears, then the officers (whatever they're called in the hospital business) gets out of the ambulance and bring a stretcher with them; all head towards Dimaza and Rythem*

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 20:38:40 +0000 UTC]

*Rythem begins to wake up alittle*

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 20:47:45 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: "Thank Chaos y'all got here..."

T.Ruby: *kneels down to Dimaza's side* "How are you doing, D?"

Dimaza: "Oh, Ah'm fine, sugah. It's Rythem Ah'm worried about..."

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 20:57:57 +0000 UTC]

Rythem: "....help...help me...please..."

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 21:04:13 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: "Rythem?"

T.Ruby: "Take it easy there, Ry. Help is here."

*the officers reach Dimaza and Rythem, then prepare to put Rythem onto the stretcher*

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 21:10:09 +0000 UTC]

Rythem: "...It's nothing Ru. I'm just beaten more than usual..."

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 21:12:54 +0000 UTC]

T.Ruby: "Nothing, schmothing. Look at the condition you're in. Like it or not, you need help."

Dimaza: "Please, Rythem..? ...For me..?"

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 21:23:08 +0000 UTC]

Rythem: "..." *sighs* "...Fine. But it's only for Dimaza, ok...?"

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 21:30:36 +0000 UTC]

*the officers carefully get Rythem onto the stretcher, then make their way back to the ambulance; Dimaza follows them, staying by Rythem's side*

Dimaza: *holds on to Rythem's hand* "...Thanks, sugah. Y'all are the best..."

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 21:32:00 +0000 UTC]

*Rythem chuckles softly, then he lets himself fall asleep*

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 21:35:00 +0000 UTC]

[ ...Time skip? ]

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 21:38:10 +0000 UTC]

[...time skip...]

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 21:47:04 +0000 UTC]

*later in the hospital...*

*Dimaza sits next to Rythem's bed, where he lies down with bandages covering his injuries*

Dimaza: *holds Rythem's hand* "..."

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 21:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Rythem: "..."

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 22:08:08 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: "...So, wha' happened back there, sugah? Ah mean, why were yer eyes and voice all creepy befo'?

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 22:18:40 +0000 UTC]

Rythem: "...!" *averts his eyes, looking away from Dimaza* "...It's abit of a curse I have. But it only takes effect when I'm cutting it close."

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 22:23:27 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: "...A curse?" *pauses, then smiles compassionately* ".....Well, curse or not, y'all are still my handsome prince. Even if it turned y'all into some crazy demon, Ah'll still stand by ya, Rythem..."

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 22:32:27 +0000 UTC]

Rythem: "..." "(Honestly. Just a stupid statement... But, it does feel good... Having her support and company...)"

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 22:47:51 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: "...Ah know that it probably sounded corny, but Ah really meant what Ah said. Why, Ah'd even give up my own life for yours if Ah had to..."

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LunaticSnivy In reply to WhiteBlade-the-Zero [2013-04-27 22:53:28 +0000 UTC]

Rythem: *chuckles* "...I'm glad I have you support, Dimaza..."

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WhiteBlade-the-Zero In reply to LunaticSnivy [2013-04-27 22:54:41 +0000 UTC]

Dimaza: *giggles* "Ah'm glad that Ah have y'all in my life. ...Even if it was by accident..."

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