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Published: 2018-08-06 14:46:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 2849; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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„What Have I Done?“….

Life can play a difficult game with winning conditions and loss conditions… situations that happen in every family, every relationship, everyone‘s life~ situations that create a person and form it over the time. Still, when something gets destroyed, something new gets the chance to enter the game…

This is the story about Chess and her family. What makes them special? What makes them weak, what makes them strong? What happened, what will happen? Find it out for yourself.  

Find the first page of Part 1 here:  fav.me/d8mz5tp

Find the first page of Part 2 here:  fav.me/d97v4uj

Find the first page of Part 3 here:  fav.me/dbzw183

Prev:  What Have I Done? 3 #29

Next: What Have I Done? 3 #31

It's time to let this old story live on, again. Yes, "What Have I Done?" is back and better than ever- expect more information, more pages and more feelings~  I hope you enjoy the last part of it.



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Comments: 20

Jatheus [2019-05-03 11:03:14 +0000 UTC]

you can't fool nature

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KieDough [2018-09-26 02:59:49 +0000 UTC]

*grips the edge of my seat with my hooves 

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tigreanpony [2018-08-07 12:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh damn, this isn't going to be good, I hope he will survive, but most likely will be in the hospital after this.

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LupiArts In reply to tigreanpony [2018-08-07 17:14:16 +0000 UTC]

Hospital sounds like an option, yes... the poor one, I feel for him

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fotland42 [2018-08-07 04:32:16 +0000 UTC]

Some may think that this is a consequence of building in the rain, but it isn't entirely. If you had waited until after the rain, and if the absence of whatever you added since the storm started meant that the house didn't collapse during the storm, it wouldn't change the fact that the foundation is insufficient and wasn't going to get any better. It would be nice if it had collapsed while you weren't here, but failing that it's better that it collapsed now rather than after you had built more house to fall down.

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LupiArts In reply to fotland42 [2018-08-07 17:15:33 +0000 UTC]

True, you've got a point there.

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SnowyLilacs [2018-08-07 02:11:53 +0000 UTC]

so he couldn't fly away in the first panel why?

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LupiArts In reply to SnowyLilacs [2018-08-07 17:13:42 +0000 UTC]

Heavy rain that wettens the feathers and strong winds make it even more dangerous to try flying

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EqDBot [2018-08-07 00:20:03 +0000 UTC]

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ExplosionMare [2018-08-06 18:47:27 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOO!!

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LupiArts In reply to ExplosionMare [2018-08-07 17:13:00 +0000 UTC]

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HunterBrony101 [2018-08-06 18:12:21 +0000 UTC]

Somepony do something! 

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LupiArts In reply to HunterBrony101 [2018-08-07 17:12:44 +0000 UTC]

Yes! We need a quick reaction!

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Delta52775 [2018-08-06 16:29:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear, so it seems all his hardworking was for nothing.

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LupiArts In reply to Delta52775 [2018-08-07 17:12:15 +0000 UTC]

Maybe they'll come up with a good solution, but right now it looks like it was..

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victorymon [2018-08-06 15:21:35 +0000 UTC]

Mist, ich muss das in deutsch schreiben, weil es nur so Sinn ergibt...

Kennt noch jemand diese Uralte Gelbe Seiten Werbung? Weil genau das ist mir durch den Kopf gegangen :

Vielleicht hätte er jemanden fragen sollen, der sich mit sowas auskennt... 

Anyway, great Page. Keeps me on edge. 

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LupiArts In reply to victorymon [2018-08-07 17:11:38 +0000 UTC]

Er kennt sich sehr gut aus, allerdings hatte er nicht mit einem Erdrutsch aufgrund starker Regengüsse gerechnet, was ihm gerade zum Verhängnis zu werden scheint... Ohje..

Thank you very much^^ Glad to hear you like it!

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A-Bright-Idea [2018-08-06 14:57:00 +0000 UTC]

damn stubborness and pride! If he had just started flying at the first creak...! >_<
Great drawing, as always!

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LupiArts In reply to A-Bright-Idea [2018-08-07 17:10:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah he is stubborn, but I doubt that he noticed the creaking sounds early enough to react and was too shocked when he finally did notice what's happening

Thank you very much^^

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A-Bright-Idea In reply to LupiArts [2018-08-07 20:07:54 +0000 UTC]

fair enough. The rain probably has a lot to do with drowning out the sound, and it's simply dramatic irony that the audience knows what's going on before the characters do.

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