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Published: 2008-04-15 04:00:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 918; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 30
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I based this piece off of a song...I can take the rain on the roof of this empty house
That don’t bother me
I can take a few tears now and then and just let them out
I’m not afraid to cry every once in a while
Even though going on with you gone still upsets me
There are days every now and again I pretend I’m ok
But that’s not what gets me
What hurts the most
Was being so close
And having so much to say
And watching you walk away
And never knowing
What could have been
And not seeing that loving you
Is what I was tryin’ to do
It’s hard to deal with the pain of losing you everywhere I go
But I’m doin’ It
It’s hard to force that smile when I see our old friends and I’m alone
Still Harder
Getting up, getting dressed, livin’ with this regret
But I know if I could do it over
I would trade give away all the words that I saved in my heart
That I left unspoken
What hurts the most
Is being so close
And having so much to say
And watching you walk away
And never knowing
What could have been
And not seeing that loving you
Is what I was trying to do
What hurts the most
Is being so close
And having so much to say
And watching you walk away
And never knowing
What could have been
And not seeing that loving you
Is what I was trying to do
Not seeing that loving you
Thats what I was trying to do
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Comments: 12
gothfiend [2008-04-20 00:31:06 +0000 UTC]
Nice work.. but would you mind a little constructive critisism? I have a few thoughts on the shadow work..
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LuvKillzTheDemon In reply to gothfiend [2008-04-20 21:10:52 +0000 UTC]
i dont mind... i always like when people let me know what i need to work on.. it only makes me progress... and get better... thank you.... yeah i knew there was something wrong with it but i just didnt know what...
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gothfiend In reply to LuvKillzTheDemon [2008-04-22 00:45:13 +0000 UTC]
awesome Im always afraid to just say it cuz some people get really mad and usually when i ask first they just ignore it and say something like "thanks
" haha
So i was thinking that the shadow on the teddy bear is good but a little too much distance.. it almost looks like its floating i would just not gausian blur quite so much or pull it in a little closer.. and the rest of it all needs shadows.. the girl needs a very small amount under her arm on the couch and on the floor under her dress.. just a tish.. same with the stands off to the sides.. and the chair itself should have a light shadow under it.. just do a circle and gausian blur alot but not too much and lighten it up. probably like 50% opac about.. maybe not quite so much.. it just needs a little bit.. to help with shadows for me i started really paying attention to real life shadows and trying to determine how thye look even indoors.... for the little things that just need a tish of shadow try to double click on the layer or right click and click either layer styles or blending options depending on wich version of PS you have. then go click on the one that says drop shadow and just do a very small one. this will make all your shadows line up evenly.
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LuvKillzTheDemon In reply to gothfiend [2008-04-22 15:57:24 +0000 UTC]
thanks alot... i wouldnt say im new but im still learning... i always appreciate whne people tell me what i need to work on... it could only help me get better... when i first started i hated criticism i thought they just thought they were better but now its like please let me know so i can work on it... cuz i want to be better... so thank you once again... and i will work on that... as soon as i get a chance...
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gothfiend In reply to LuvKillzTheDemon [2008-04-23 00:23:50 +0000 UTC]
Sure I feel the same way
If it wasnt for people and their
I wouldnt know half the stuff I know now.. I had the same problem with shadows for a long time and also how somethings further back should be more blurry then the things closer up... just remember to look at things around you and be more observant..
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LuvKillzTheDemon In reply to gothfiend [2008-04-23 13:12:41 +0000 UTC]
alright thanks... ill keep that in mind.. thanks for the help...
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LuvKillzTheDemon In reply to Tasastock [2008-04-15 16:03:27 +0000 UTC]
your welcome... you have very beautiful stock...
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SallyZombie [2008-04-15 04:09:43 +0000 UTC]
I like this. It's sorta sad but beautiful. Really awesome
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KAWIICHIBI12 [2008-04-15 04:04:30 +0000 UTC]
for some reason it looks like the girl and couch with the teddy standout alittle but good Job
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Darnell-Johnson [2008-04-15 04:03:12 +0000 UTC]
Is she in labor? I hear child birth hurts the most.
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