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lyoth737 β Tond Nigru Redux Prolog 2
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~page 2 or no nice shadow in this forest
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Did you see that poor mouse? Let's go out on a demonstration to save that poor thing.
Weird enough, the prologue in the old version of lyoth737.deviantart.com/art/To⦠is only 2 pages long. This version contains 4 pages.... lol
Should I animate the "!!" bubbles? I thought about doing that, but wouldn't it take the eye away from the plot?
Let me hear your voice about quality and if I should animate or not. Not that I won't love to hear comments anyway 
PS: Isn't that llama icon just cuuuuuuuuuutee?? I can't stop staring at it, seriously!! Eyebleeding cuutee!!!!
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Haha, I love how different yet fluid the emotional changes are--I'd expect it to be too jarring--needing more panels--but it doesn't.
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got away the last second
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thanks! The owl is hilarous, isn't it? xD
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Yes, it is. It's simply adorable in the first panel.
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hmmn... should I try to include it again in later chapters? (just as a bit-part player)
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If you could fit it in, I wouldn't say no to that.
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