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Published: 2011-07-18 02:48:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2002; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 17
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Description Remember this guy? [link]

Yeah, decided he needed a bit of a do over. Outfit changed a bit, removed wings, (Will have some form of flight later on in the story.) and re did his sword. (Not his only weapon.)

Here's a bio for him I'm working on so far.

Name: Tibalt Heartstone
Age: 23
Species: Avelon Ferillian (Will be explained later, but questions are welcome.) ^w^
Height: 5ft, 7'
Weight: 159.2 lbs
Birth Place: Avelon Plain 69
Place of Upbringing: Adimer Town
Family: Anadona Heartstone (Adoptive Mother)
Henry Heartstone (Adoptive Father.)
Personality: Short tempered, honest, greatful (At times.), 4th wall breaking.

Bio: Tibalt knows little of how he came to be. His earliest memory is at the age of 9, waking up in the Heartstone guest room, where Anadona was tending to his injuries. He was found in the crashed remains of an Avelon vessel, in the hands of a dying Avelon female, who begged Anadona to care for him as her own, then shortly died from her injuries from the crash. Tibalt has no memory of that woman, or why he was on that vessel, so ever since then he's has been raised as a member of the Heartstone family. Helping them tend the family farm and Inn. His foster parents knew there was something different about him when he was growing up. His strength as quite above average for someone of his age. (Then again, it's was hard for most people to pull a cart fully loaded with farming supplies and equipment.) Then again, not many knew about the Avelon Ferillians. Even so, they loved him as their own son. Tibalt was one known to be quite spoiled as a child, due to his strength, but he still wasn't quite as strong as his father, who taught him to be disciplined and only use his capabilities to help others. Tibalt knows that he's that nice of a person, and for some strange reason, he has this feeling of dread in his head that he can't explain, he still believes he can overcome it and a be more well rounded person. While he may not like to listen to what most others have to say, but he'll be willing to help those who really need it, and believes everyone has the right to live. (Though he also believes if one dares to ignore that right, he won't hesitate to kill you.) By the age of 21, he felt it was time to find a place for him in this world, and see if he can find out who he is exactly, and where did he come from.
So with that, he kissed his foster parents good bye, and went on to make purpose of himself, knowing that there will always be a place for him in the town of Adimer.

Powers/Abilities: Enhanced physical abilities (Strength, speed. endurance, etc.) , minor gravity manipulation, above average regeneration, (Not quite up to Wolverine's level of regeneration, but fairly impressive.) Weapon manifestation, (Will be explained later, sixth sense sensory. (Not much, but it's something.)

Extra abilites: Enhancements on previously stated abilities. (Project G.N.A.Y.)

Weakness/Fear:Electicity (Large enough shock could short circut the CPU to his armory temporarily.), loneliness. (Cliche, but needed something.)

Personal quote: You seem to be talking to me as if I cared, which I have some doubts on believing.

Please let me know what you think of him so far. I'm quite serious about developing him and my story, "Tales of an Avelon." Also, any questions you have would be grateful as well. ^w^

EDIT: My apologies to for not mentioning he was the one that made that Ciorheta Font font that was used originally. It has been replaced with Greek until further notice.

Tibalt Heartstone (C) Mario A. Chacon Deleon (AKA: me)
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Comments: 89

M-A-C-D In reply to ??? [2012-10-17 22:09:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^w^

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MissPounceALot [2012-10-14 20:34:00 +0000 UTC]

This guy is the kinda person you take one look at and say "Geez, heΒ΄s a badass"
He looks totally calm AND intimidating all at the same time
Really good job on everything! Its amazing ^^

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M-A-C-D In reply to MissPounceALot [2012-10-15 02:44:04 +0000 UTC]

Thankies. ^w^

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alcrd119 [2011-11-25 22:16:26 +0000 UTC]

Yes , totaly Squall based character. Still good job tho ^^

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M-A-C-D In reply to alcrd119 [2011-11-25 22:55:34 +0000 UTC]

Tibalt: What the **** did you just say to me!?

(Seriously, I didn't even know who Squall was until people keep comparing Tibalt to him.)

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alcrd119 In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-11-26 01:38:18 +0000 UTC]

Black pants - check
Short black jacket with white fur - check
Gun/Sword hybrid - check
Pokerface - check
Specific anime-like hairstyle - check

People compare him to Squall cause you made him look like furry version of Squall duh! So don't play fool cause no one is buying that you made him from scratch. You 100% based him on Squall.

There are no coincident's

Trivia: Squall Leonhart is main character of most FF games

his pic:

[link]



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M-A-C-D In reply to alcrd119 [2011-11-26 02:36:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm serious. His actual design base is that of Greed from FMA.

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alcrd119 In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-11-26 03:35:22 +0000 UTC]

Well he looks much like Squall. He's too "gentle" looking to be Greed.

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DreamVirusOmega [2011-07-18 20:57:55 +0000 UTC]

I want that sword...

Also, I notice a trigger. What does it fire, if anything?

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M-A-C-D In reply to DreamVirusOmega [2011-07-18 21:16:24 +0000 UTC]

That will be explained when I post a pic explaining that sword. ^w^

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swordman16 [2011-07-18 12:23:00 +0000 UTC]

huh nice blade! X3

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M-A-C-D In reply to swordman16 [2011-07-18 16:58:49 +0000 UTC]

Thankies Sword.

Any questions? ^w^

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swordman16 In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-19 13:11:20 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm well how good of a warroir is he? X3

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M-A-C-D In reply to swordman16 [2011-07-19 17:47:02 +0000 UTC]

Doesn't know much with weapon based combat. His friends and CPU teach him on his journey.

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swordman16 In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-19 22:43:41 +0000 UTC]

CPU?

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M-A-C-D In reply to swordman16 [2011-07-19 22:54:07 +0000 UTC]

Read this. [link]

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swordman16 In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-19 22:56:26 +0000 UTC]

wow good story depth the whole mana thing is just right but the nanobits? not sure

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M-A-C-D In reply to swordman16 [2011-07-19 23:50:36 +0000 UTC]

Why no nanites?

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swordman16 In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-20 00:46:26 +0000 UTC]

well the cyborgnetic part is reather..not cliche but I think its good but maybe it should be something different but no worries

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M-A-C-D In reply to swordman16 [2011-07-20 00:55:51 +0000 UTC]

Okay then.

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swordman16 In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-20 01:03:55 +0000 UTC]

X3 X3

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M-A-C-D In reply to swordman16 [2011-07-20 01:20:20 +0000 UTC]

How should I rework on the other characters?

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swordman16 In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-20 01:22:08 +0000 UTC]

not sure I mean you can still try but try something else if you want

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M-A-C-D In reply to swordman16 [2011-07-20 02:34:12 +0000 UTC]

Okay then. ^w^

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lugiacollector [2011-07-18 10:07:22 +0000 UTC]

He does remind me of the characters from Final Fantasy, and kingdom hearts (I know FF Came first, and thus the character is from there before I start a flame war). The weapon and jacket really reflect the characters, so you're going to get a few comparasons :/

Overall though, cool art. Only complaint I can think of is he looks unbalancedto me. I now in the pic he's stood firmly, but if this was reality, I can't help but think he would fall on his butt.

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M-A-C-D In reply to lugiacollector [2011-07-18 17:03:12 +0000 UTC]

Tibalt: You think I wanted to look like this? :/

Thanks. ^w^ Also, how so?

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lugiacollector In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-18 17:35:34 +0000 UTC]

@Tibalt, Blame your creator, not me.

@MACD, The physics in this pic (If they were under normal situations), deem this picture to be illogically balanced, seeing as the GUNBLADE would be significately heavier than the carrier. Therefore, Tibalt should be feeling forces pulling him back, and onto his rump. I am also taking the feet style into my views also. But as we say in the art world, 'ITS OUR WORLD!'

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M-A-C-D In reply to lugiacollector [2011-07-18 17:53:36 +0000 UTC]

Tibalt: Oh, I know.

Well yeah. I've explained the bio that Tibalt's strength is quite above average.) plus I figured the tail could explain the balance issue.

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lugiacollector In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-18 19:03:08 +0000 UTC]

But the tail is behind said character. If it was to balance Tibalt, he would need to be leaning forward, to have the tail working with him. and strength doesn't over come gravity.

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M-A-C-D In reply to lugiacollector [2011-07-18 19:09:44 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't?

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lugiacollector In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-18 21:02:49 +0000 UTC]

No, because strength is force in a particular direction, whereas gravity is a constant. Because the strength of your character is (Presumingly) applied in a circular motion (At the wrist), it doesnt over come the gravity force, times the mass of the GUNBLADE heading straight down. I should know, I passed Physics A-Level XD

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M-A-C-D In reply to lugiacollector [2011-07-18 21:17:56 +0000 UTC]

Powers/Abilities: Enhanced physical abilities (Strength, speed. endurance, etc.) , minor gravity manipulation, above average regeneration, (Not quite up to Wolverine's level of regeneration, but fairly impressive.) Weapon manifestation, (Will be explained later, sixth sense sensory. (Not much, but it's something.)

Check in 493 moves.

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lugiacollector In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-19 00:59:01 +0000 UTC]

TL;DR, I didn't want to read. Ergo, I didn't know about that. But it doesnt mean checkmate. For you see, I could just summon exodia, and win a totally different, and unrelated game altogther.

And I have stated, and I quote, 'this is the art world', meaning that theres no limitations. but reading it now...That's over powered. Not enough weaknesses IMO.

Also, nice reference to the pokemon count before the 5th gen came out. I applaud you for that good sir.

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M-A-C-D In reply to lugiacollector [2011-07-19 01:08:53 +0000 UTC]

I guess you're right. Then again, the antagonist is even more broken. X3

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lugiacollector In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-19 14:30:01 +0000 UTC]

Not good character designs. You don't want Mary-sues. But I can't speak. My characters are usually disposable, seeing as I either: a) Can't think of a backstory, b) Haven no idea what to actually do with them, or c) I get bored of them.

I have a few long life characters, but they're usually sonas, so they don't really count :/

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M-A-C-D In reply to lugiacollector [2011-07-19 17:48:21 +0000 UTC]

But I've did several sue tests with them, and the scored to be averaged and balanced.

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lugiacollector In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-19 18:42:13 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, but IMO they arent.

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M-A-C-D In reply to lugiacollector [2011-07-19 19:20:05 +0000 UTC]

Okay then. I suppose he could have a weakness to electricity. (A large enough shock that could temporary shut down his CPU and access to his armory.)

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lugiacollector In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-20 11:48:29 +0000 UTC]

Makes him rounded, oui

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M-A-C-D In reply to lugiacollector [2011-07-20 15:33:55 +0000 UTC]

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JH03L [2011-07-18 08:23:11 +0000 UTC]

Damn Love the redesign! The jacket is sexy and the face is just awesome and he has an interesting personality and you already have a pretty good background story
Just remember to also develop environmental story like politics, current events, races tradition and history and all that stuff
Im am looking forward to this story..will it be comic form?

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M-A-C-D In reply to JH03L [2011-07-18 08:39:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot Ulth. It means a lot to hear that. (Though I should explain the age thing I guess a bit.) I'll be sure to work on that. ^w^

Yes, it will be a comic. ^w^

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JH03L In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-19 06:38:08 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome ^U^
Are you going to do a redux of the others?
if so you should try more details to the costume and make it more illustrate and vivid so it catches the eyes. and also be sure to make costumes of species different from other species to add a sense in racial pride, thou if they wear other races style of clothing they may seem to have submitted to the culture of a friend/Enemy race

Yay! in color?

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M-A-C-D In reply to JH03L [2011-07-19 07:46:35 +0000 UTC]

Indeed so, but only when they show up in the comic.

As for pesonality and state of living to match their attire, what would fit them best?

Gem: Dragon, pacifest, princess
Pyra: Fox, nurtering, nomadic sorceress.
Kelvin: Fox/Coyote, smooth talking con man and and marksman, bounty hunter
Issac: Cat, impatient and serious, nobility and scientific researcher.

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JH03L In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-20 03:48:02 +0000 UTC]

hmmm cool
well good luck on this
how many races are there in the story?
and will the comic be in color?

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M-A-C-D In reply to JH03L [2011-07-20 04:39:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^w^

Well I'm still figuring out what species to use for the mortal realm, and names for different species of angels and demons. (If there can be different kind of demons, why not angels?)

Hopefully yes. ^w^

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JH03L In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-20 05:00:19 +0000 UTC]

well you defently need angels if your going to have demons
doe some research on such things, demons can take all many of shapes and sizes thou that is just my opinion alone

Yeesss!

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M-A-C-D In reply to JH03L [2011-07-20 05:04:39 +0000 UTC]

True, but why can't angels do the same? (One of the antagonistic characters in mind is technically an angel.)

^w^

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JH03L In reply to M-A-C-D [2011-07-20 08:31:54 +0000 UTC]

because angels would believe only in purity and truth
demons are corrupt and ambitious, demons would take to opportunity of power as the angel would remain

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M-A-C-D In reply to JH03L [2011-07-20 15:32:05 +0000 UTC]

Who says all angels are pure? X3 (To me, any celestial being can be an angel, and celestial beings aren't always a good thing.)

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