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Published: 2012-01-22 00:29:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 585; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 4
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My first critique. hope its good! Understand that this is to help you, not to offend you in anyway.
First of all, this looks pretty good! I love how you have done the roses although the stalks look a little to think to me :/ I love their positions, but its not that original. I have seen LOTS of poses like this, with intertwining tails and the wings and.. whatever. The shading is mind blowing though, I doubt I could EVER achieve this. But, the anatomy is good, its just a little off. For instance, marine's wing ( I don't know what they are called, Spokes? ) Anyway, one of them starts to early and they bend a little TOO much. Imagine that the bone there should be bent in certain places, not a consistent bend... And the arms need some more muscle e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
But, I could never draw this!
So I guess i'm being a little harsh.
Its very good, keep making these!
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Ya! thanks! ^^ and no I dont think your harsh at all 
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realy?
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You need to upload more ^^
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That is very nice looking there. One of your better drawings so far!
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Thanks Atlas ^.=.^ that means alot to me!
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so lovely!! and omg you got 117 views on it already!!
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You got a hundred views in a day!!
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DAWWWWW... JUST KISS HER AGAIN ALREADY!!!
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Wait, you JUST kissed her?
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were 15-16 so yeah derp
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No, when I said kiss her, did you actually do it then?
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i kiss her everyday at school
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It's amazing, huh? Being in love?
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looks as great as when i first saw it. i love you so much
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aww
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jeje you're welcome
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No problem buddy! :3
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