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m4te0 — Couple hugging
Published: 2004-07-13 20:48:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 3357; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 1021
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Well, that drawing was done about a month ago and all that time I hoped I will find some will to finish it in details. Unfortunatelly I didn't. It became to something detailed but still simple sketch with many mistakes.Some parts I like, some parts I hate, but there is no parts I really admire. Maybe I couldn't do it better but it only motivates me to work more. The idea was to give the feeling of shape and dark, passionate tones.
Anyway, I know I can be better, but laziness is my obstacle. Luckily, you guys, inspire my bored ass, THANK YOU FROM THE DEEPEST NOOK IN MY HEART:] (if you can say this in English)
This is generally pencil(s), from H to 9 or 8B. Enjoy and if u feel u want to express your opinion about this drawing please write a comment.
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also WOW your arm must have been aching after doing that back ground in pencil!! you did a great job!!
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Your pic is so great you must have put have put a lot of time and effort in it congrats!
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I don't count hours. I don't need to know that, but maybe it was more less 10 hours. I haven't a clue - it's not so important
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well it is kinda. coz anyone can draw something fantastic in a long space of time. yours is nice doe.
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It wouldn't be so realistic if u didn't care about every little detail, and that requires time and of course your seeing of things. Let's call it talent. Anyway I don't find such art theories more profitable than practise. My advice: draw as much as you can.
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That's incredible! 
I wished I could draw more, but I'm really lazy and tired the last few months (years? 
I can't wait to see more of your fantastic artworks!
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the fact, that it isn't complete doesnt matter to me, i like the few parts that were roughly done too! and in general, especially the lighting is outstanding. maybe you do find the time to finish it / work on some of the details, i think it'd be worth it -- it's worth a fav for sure
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What an amazing amount of detail. This is just generally beautiful to look at. I wish my sketches resembled at least something like this.
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Maju maj.. piekne..
swietne cienie .. wyborna robota!
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this drawing is really beautiful, i've seen your first drawings and i must say you've improved a lot! it deserves to be
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no m4t, tos przyszalal, naprawde piekny rysunek, gratulacje
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that is absolutely amazing. I can't get over how smooth it looks. My pencil drawings always look very rough. They look so real!
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well, to someone like me who only dreams of drawing something as good as this, this is amazing. i specially like their hair (i just never can get it right).
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Love the contrast of light and dark--a very dramatic piece!
V
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Excellent. A little sketchiness near the bottom but it creates a good effect.
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i agree with Ebbeh...its nice sometimes when things get shrunken down and the lines just become that much more crisp. technically an EXCELLENT drawing but if you're looking for a crit, us artists are always willing to give:
nice placing the figures on the black background (which i'm assuming is not pencil hehe), it makes them pop and adds to the moody feel.
however, she is definately looking at someone else...and doesnt look to be too comfortable. there may be a hint of concern on his face as well, not sure. might be like a protection thing...its passionate sure but not in the 'i want to take you to bed now' kind.
again ebbeh is right...all attention is on her. even the folds of her shirt is highlighted strongly. maybe bring that down a notch.
for my 2 cents otherwise its a bloody good drawing and you should continue.
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WOW, thanks for such constructive comment. Your interpretation really helped me to look at my drawing in different way.
And the background is pencil
I'm not going to finish it , because i'm tired of this drawing. I want to start something new, which will allow me to learn something more. My drawings are nothing more than training, that's why some of them are unfinished.
Thanks again
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lol wow the bg is pencil?! damn i bet your hand was sore for days!
no prob on the crit. thats what we're here for. nice idea starting a new one (if i were you i wouldnt want to deal with erasing that beautiful lead-y detail and turn it to nothing but smudges)
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In this low-res it doesn't show to be a simple sketch. I also can't really see what mistakes you're talking about.
The hugging couple doesn't look very passionate. The man falls into the background and attention is drawn to the woman's face, who looks kindof insecure. Is that maybe one of the things you're not happy about?
BTW, another lazy person overhere!
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The whole picture doesn't look as sketch, but there are some parts where I just filled with pencil to not leave blank space.
I generally concentrated on the technical part. Reason I chose that reference photo is its composiotion just cought my eye. There was something mysterious (where is she looking?
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Now I understand the picture better. I might had gotten the wrong idea about the expression. You're being very hard on your own work. But hey, that probably got you to the level you're at.
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ooo my god!!! its really amazing - you have great talent
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