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Comments: 44

TheGeminiMan2005 [2020-08-24 12:47:09 +0000 UTC]

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L-MASTER [2015-03-03 12:59:30 +0000 UTC]

extreme TT^TT

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MacTavish1996 In reply to L-MASTER [2015-03-03 15:00:30 +0000 UTC]

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AbigailBreslin [2014-09-02 10:03:35 +0000 UTC]

OMG!. It makes me sad! .But great job ;3 ( More than my favorite Shipping Norman and Coraline )

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segamarvel In reply to AbigailBreslin [2014-10-04 02:53:39 +0000 UTC]

That didn't happen.

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FriendoftheDoctor [2014-08-10 22:10:05 +0000 UTC]

This better not happen in the actual story.

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YoshiRingo In reply to FriendoftheDoctor [2014-08-26 10:16:41 +0000 UTC]

from what i heard, it did, and it sucks ;-;

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segamarvel In reply to YoshiRingo [2014-10-03 22:26:06 +0000 UTC]

No it didn't.

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YoshiRingo [2014-08-03 00:18:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh that's just messed up, already looks like the worst fanfic and shipping ever made since that mordaci ship, just being honest

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segamarvel In reply to YoshiRingo [2014-10-04 02:53:15 +0000 UTC]

Worst fanfic and shipping? Nope. Trust me Sonic and Rainbow Dash makes less sense.

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YoshiRingo In reply to segamarvel [2014-10-04 10:08:32 +0000 UTC]

How does the Sonic and Dash one make less sense? at least with the Sonic one, there's a bigger fanbase, both characters from both series have some similarities, and both Sonic and Dash are lovable assholes. I don't support that ship either, but if anything made sense around this gullible group of fans that ship whatever random characters together, then the Sonic one would be up there.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=f2DAsx…
www.youtube.com/watch?v=ecJEaP…
www.youtube.com/watch?v=SgagtB…
www.youtube.com/watch?v=i6ByP4…

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segamarvel In reply to YoshiRingo [2014-10-04 10:19:18 +0000 UTC]

I don't blame you for hating on the ship. I really don't. But the story writing in general is top notch and doesn't deserve to be lumped together with fanfics that are TRULY bad. Some are so short you can hardly tell if it was ever going anywhere. Some are so random that you have no idea what's going on. Some are so out of character that you wanna hurl. This is not one of those stories. This has been worked on and edited over and over for years to be the best it could be simply because the author truly cares about pleasing ALL his fans.

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YoshiRingo In reply to segamarvel [2014-10-04 11:15:16 +0000 UTC]

Let me guess, takes ideas from Spiderman movies like having multiple wives, they met because of some magic spell and loved each other during the process of saving the world. Well if he's trying to please a fanbase, it's a very small one

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segamarvel In reply to YoshiRingo [2014-10-04 19:38:35 +0000 UTC]

Nope. Your surprisingly more wrong then I thought. Look I cant make you like it. But the ideas from most of his story that make up this version of Spider-Man besides his origin are a breath of fresh air. Plus why judge this based on the size of the fanbase? Plus no the multiple wives thing doesn't happen. I'm honestly trying to not sound angry with you. I simply said I don't care what you think of the ship. You calling the story writing the "worst" is really the only part I thought of as being judgemental. If you didn't have anything nice to say why say anything at all? Sigh I'm done with this conversation. Simply because I don't like to get into arguments. Have a good day. Lets leave it at that and not start a flame war ok?

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YoshiRingo In reply to segamarvel [2014-10-04 21:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Well that's up to you, I just say what I see, the only art I see from these two are them kissing, each one says they are a commission, which means there aren't any real fans that draw this because they want to, but only if they get paid. I also did see that he does have multiple wives from two drawings I saw, including Sweetie Belle and Pinkie Pie with a scar, one of them I believe he paid a whopping $60-100+ drawing when I saw the prices on them. So that's another reason why I think its one of the worst, at least with Fallout Equestria, the writer doesn't pay people to draw his characters, they have nothing to do with canon as well.

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segamarvel In reply to YoshiRingo [2014-10-04 21:45:21 +0000 UTC]

That is once again untrue. He is not the only one who has pictures made for it. Plus the multiple wives thing was edited out. If you didn't like the pictures you saw why didn't you just ignore it? It's not like it's hurting anyone.

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doctoe In reply to segamarvel [2015-03-16 21:38:31 +0000 UTC]

Well i support them more then flash.

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segamarvel In reply to doctoe [2015-03-16 21:39:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh I see.

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YoshiRingo In reply to segamarvel [2014-10-05 11:56:39 +0000 UTC]

So first he says he has multiple wives, and now he doesn't? That'll just confuse the readers and viewers. And yeah, most are commissions, even bought from you and uploaded on your profile. So I'm not allowed to speak my mind? Better than those boring comments that read "great job, not bad, I hope Twilight doesn't die in here" and a bunch of comments spoiling the new Spiderman movie, also telling us that the guy who wrote this whole fic ripped off a scene from a movie. Now, it doesn't hurt anyone, neither does sushi, I hate sushi, I can say I hate sushi, maybe others will have the same opinion, so I left a small comment, which is months old, so I don't know what you're doing looking at old comments to a drawing that's not in your profile. So yes, in my opinion, this looks like a terrible fanfic idea, the writing already sounds like its taking from the movies and replacing Peter's girlfriends with ponies, including an adult sweetie belle for some reason. Hell, I just Skyped a friend from Russia that loves R34, he told me that the dude who wrote the fic even bought commissions with Peter having sex with his "girlfriends", I cant link them if I knew, but he did say it was in derpibooru. So yeah, spending all his money on pictures on something dumb

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segamarvel In reply to YoshiRingo [2014-10-05 12:17:46 +0000 UTC]

First of all. It is my business because I'm the one who commissioned the picture we are talking about. No his blog always updates and tells his followers what changes are made before hand. Plus if people hate it so much then why are there so many more upvotes instead of downvotes on both the pictures and story?For all I know you probably wish you had as much money as this guy makes.If anything I'm in a better position to judge this since I actually know all the facts. Plus dude come on when the movie has been out for this long it's pretty obvious that spoilers are expected (even though an old school fan would already know the outcome from the original comics). This story even saved a guys life from committing suicide. Which I'm sure you didn't know since you haven't actually read everything about it (not that I'm asking you to). You don't have to link me to any pictures as I'm well aware of those as well. And I could care less about what he makes outside of the canon story. I didn't mean to say you couldn't speak your mind. Just that your judging it for the wrong reasons. But you do have a point about having opinions. No one is truly right or wrong about this. So I'm willing to be the first to say sorry for the way I reacted and that I hope that in the near future the next time we chat we can have a pleasant conversation. Were both Bronies after all so lets love and tolerate. First things first. Change of subject. Who's best pony?

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YoshiRingo In reply to segamarvel [2014-10-06 09:25:54 +0000 UTC]

Didn't say there was nothing wrong with uploading other people's work on you profile, still not into that idea, but hey, whatever floats your boat. I don't know what changes since, like I said, I don't read the fanfic, hell, I stopped reading fanfics a long time ago, most of them are ridiculous or out of story to the canon stuff, there are many other reasons, like how it can take too much of my time. No I'm not jealous on how much he makes, I have a job, last month I made 12 grand and even got a bonus pay from the Captain of the Company along with a special metal. I'm fine with money, I used it to pay my bills and even buy a new MacBook, with $200 to spare, so no, I don't wish to have as much money as he does, I just don't spend it on stupid stuff on a character I barely created, I kid you not, my have over 500 fanarts from this 3DS art app I got two years ago, I only buy at least one $20-30 commission per month, I don't go crazy with them, only buy from artists I love, not to get my character's cheap fanfic popular.

Coin and MacBook for proof:

I Got the MacBook ProToday I took an hour drive and had to drop off my grandma to the LA hospital to fix some paperwork that would take hours. So while she was there, I drove to this electronic store I'm familiar with that's also in my town. It was time for me to get a computer, and I always wanted a MacBook Pro.

Sha-sha! I has it now! OMG I was so happy to finally have my own computer instead of either a friend, a brother, or daily computer. Here it is in all its fine glory.

The price was $1,400 for the 8GB with 250GB of memory, which is what I need, so I pay about $130 per month with my credit for 18 months. So right now I'm almost out of money till my next drill, and I have money extra for next month, I'll be good as long as I don't spend anymore. Next payday I'll get a drawing tablet and start my art here on this beauty. ^^

Now as with the spoilers, I haven't watched the Spiderman 2 movie, I wanted to watch it, but at the time, I decided to buy a new backpack that was on special for $25, later came out on DVD and all, I'm not paying $25 for a disc, so I'll wait to watch it somewhere else like Netflix. Now I don't know anything on this guy's suicide, I don't know why he wanted to kill himself, and I have no idea how this dumb fanfic saved a life, what, the dude read Spiderman making out with a pony and he feels better? At least with me, I talk to people with depression and thoughts on suicide than reading them a bad bedtime story or telling them not to kill themselves over and over again.
Now why do we judge? Because it's society, society judges on what they see, so I see this, and give my thoughts, I've heard from other fanfic readers that it's the only thing they are good at, even have a friend who bothers me a lot to draw him art of his OC for his fanfic, and yes it's bad. The only pony fic that I heard is doing great is that Fallout fic, but I still dont read it since I heard its dark with death all over, plus a shit ton of chapters. I might be a brony, but I always point out the bad and ugly stuff about this fandom, how we are the damn ugliest men and nerdiests girls, and not even the smart ones, just over hyped fans for a pony show that claim they love everything and tolerate with people, when they really do not, I've been there. I've been to meet ups and a con, and man, barely will I meet with decent people. I still love the show, the characters, and how dedicated SOME fans are, while the rest just follow whatever the next brony is doing, like the stupid GAK thing last year. Ponies will be a part of me just like any other subjects I love, I will still draw them, even if its in a crowd of brainless neckbeards that smell too damn sweaty, yes, been there, I could barely breath in that comic store. And that's why I judge, part of what society does. Rainbow Dash is the best.

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segamarvel In reply to YoshiRingo [2014-10-06 09:44:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm not even gonna comment back to the things you just said simply because this cycle of arguing was never pleasing. So I'll just answer the last part of your comment. In my opinion AppleJack is best pony. Wanna know why? It's because she's the most "responsible" if you get my reference.

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FlutterDash75 [2014-07-21 00:55:01 +0000 UTC]

great job there^^

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Nova225 [2014-07-18 20:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Is it the Spiderman that made a deal with the Devil ?
*And then, yelling and swearing could be heard from Linkara, over the Internet*

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segamarvel In reply to Nova225 [2014-10-03 22:26:40 +0000 UTC]

Seriously? Why do people even bother to joke about that anymore?

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Nova225 In reply to segamarvel [2014-10-04 02:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Because people have minds, which holds thoughts and memories, and allow for thinking and referencing of moments and elements from the past ?
Something along those lines.

Also, I can't help but notice the MARVEL part of your name. I suspect a bias.

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segamarvel In reply to Nova225 [2014-10-04 02:44:45 +0000 UTC]

Also no I'm not looking for a fight or flame war or whatever. And to answer your question this is most definitely not the same spidey who made a deal with the devil. If anything he had a chapter where he said how stupid that was himself.

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segamarvel In reply to Nova225 [2014-10-04 02:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I'm a marvel fan. What of it? All I'm saying is that I've heard people complain over OMD again and again and again and still it continues. I don't condone that event either but I don't hate the character for it. It's the writer. And even then not all the blame goes to Spidey. 

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Nova225 In reply to segamarvel [2014-10-05 02:27:07 +0000 UTC]

*Cricket Sound* : www.youtube.com/watch?v=K8E_zM…

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segamarvel In reply to Nova225 [2014-10-05 02:32:21 +0000 UTC]

I don't have a response for that. Nor do I care.

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Nova225 In reply to segamarvel [2014-10-05 14:52:03 +0000 UTC]

Exactly.

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segamarvel In reply to Nova225 [2014-10-05 20:33:25 +0000 UTC]

Meaning? Oh forget it. Change of subject. Who's best pony?

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BoneSatellite [2014-07-16 05:17:47 +0000 UTC]

If that were Spike holding her, this would actually be heartbreaking.

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ShaneySqueeBoy [2014-07-16 00:16:56 +0000 UTC]

And thus, the arch-rivalry with the Green Goblin begins...

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DavidCurser [2014-07-16 00:07:15 +0000 UTC]

Dawwwwwwww that movie was sooo good, and that scene was SOO FREAKING SAD! GENIUS! Letting important charakters die, I love it!

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richfiles [2014-07-15 23:08:04 +0000 UTC]

NOPE, NOPE, NOPE!!!
She's fine! Just fine!

Amazing picture...
But I reject your universe and substitute my own...
Maybe somewhere, somewhen, somehow... Magneighto rules, and this pair is living together, happily married with one foal!


Props if you get the reference!

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Darthsylar12 In reply to richfiles [2014-07-16 04:00:25 +0000 UTC]

House of M!!!...if anyone deserves a universe where everyone got what they want...its Peter Parker. 

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richfiles In reply to Darthsylar12 [2014-07-16 05:56:42 +0000 UTC]


This is just for you!
Now don't go and spend it all on one site!

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segamarvel [2014-07-15 22:39:52 +0000 UTC]

segamarvel.deviantart.com/art/… Ok did I credit you properly?

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segamarvel [2014-07-14 20:24:47 +0000 UTC]

LOVE It! I'll commission you again once I start rolling in some money.

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DarthWill3 [2014-07-14 19:26:20 +0000 UTC]

"Please, wake up..."

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EdoNovaIllustrator [2014-07-14 19:15:04 +0000 UTC]

not bad :3

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DashieMLPFiM [2014-07-14 18:59:46 +0000 UTC]

I can truly see Twilight Sparkle as Gwen Stacy for a reason. That was one of the saddest moments in the Amazing Spiderman 2.

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brunerss In reply to DashieMLPFiM [2014-07-15 23:08:42 +0000 UTC]

But it started on the comics, that was also one of the saddest moments

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