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Published: 2003-10-17 13:56:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 413; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 60
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Description Flecks of cigarette ash
Nestle neon
Against skin
Tanned sepia by days
I'd rather forget.
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Comments: 11

BlueLoserPony [2003-12-29 19:02:53 +0000 UTC]

wow... i love this times ten... it's like you're still stuck on the beauty and meaning of the last line, and then you're hit with another great one... and it has wonderful imagery... this one's a fave!

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madhs In reply to BlueLoserPony [2003-12-30 17:02:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ever so much... it means so much when people interact with the written word. And coming from you- thats a huge compliment!

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BlueLoserPony In reply to madhs [2003-12-31 02:05:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks :: i know what you mean about comments though, there's things you overlook until someone mentions it.

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madhs [2003-10-18 06:47:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks all.
hmmm.... so you like my E's...

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nikhil [2003-10-18 06:15:29 +0000 UTC]

memo to self...eh. i'd love to write down stuph like this too...but problem is i dont have a scanner & my handwriting on the comp with a mouse isin't really an option...

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madhs In reply to nikhil [2003-10-18 06:50:12 +0000 UTC]

you could try using handwritten fonts...shall send some across.

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animiaw [2003-10-17 22:26:15 +0000 UTC]

i also like the e's

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capt-toenail [2003-10-17 17:21:25 +0000 UTC]

i like your e's

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capt-toenail [2003-10-17 17:19:54 +0000 UTC]

skin
Tanned sepia by days
I'd rather forget.


awesome!!! i mean - uh.. hmm very poetic.

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madhs In reply to capt-toenail [2003-10-18 06:48:58 +0000 UTC]

ha! Almost got caught in a platitude... nice save.

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capt-toenail In reply to madhs [2003-10-18 08:21:30 +0000 UTC]


*bows*

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