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Published: 2011-08-12 18:47:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 6034; Favourites: 176; Downloads: 69
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Since I'm still on the mend from the bells palsy harassing my faaaaace, I decided to do more pokrmon art!I was bored last night, watching speed paintings of pokemon on YT, and decided I wanted to draw one. So I looked up a random number generator, got Braviary as a Pokemon, watched some videos of eagles, and TAAA-DAAA
I'm trying out another style, where I don't use outlines. Its a bit harder for me, but I think I did a pretty decent job ^^
DO NOT STEAL OR I'LL GIVE YOU BELLS PALSY D:
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The truth? I live in the world of pokemon.....
I'm attack by bravre every moring.....
Almost R*PED By a anoying servperer......
(* = A)
It's so gross! HE MAKES LICKS HIS B*LLS, (Sorta airy, wet.... gross ETC)
And he sticks his tail up my pee hole......
Then I go though the whole thing all over again but with DRAGNAIRE!
Then I go to oak's house lay two eggs... (some times I lay none at all!) Then take a long long long long walk to my bro's house. Who is Danny dragon's breath. Some times Wendell is is there....... Ofthen smoke because Danny STILL can't breath fire. Ugh....... All this to get to my bro's house. Some timeas I go to My master Carmel's house instend of Danny's house. But hey that's just me.
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So my first thought when I saw this was "wow". The realistic direction was a nice breath of fresh air from your other works. Not that they're no good, just that I think this one is awesome. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
The head is easily my favorite part. Go figure, its the peice you purposely made to stand out. The shading and texturing is near PERFECT. And I love its "you talking to me" expression. Note the eyes and the way the head is cocked abit to the side. XD
Id go into this whole long spheal (c wut I did thar) about how well you exectuted the blurring of the foreground and background bits, but I'm not a art major and quite frankly I just don't feel like it.
So, now to BE frank: not a HUGE fan of the feathers. VERY sharp edged, uncharacteristic of both Braviary and the Bald Eagle you (And POKEMON. Stupid terrier and trashbag...) used as reference in creating this. I'll let the large spacings of the tail feathers slide because they realistically fan out like that, but not SO much on the wings, given the angle and implied trajectory. My only real issue is that the spacings are rectangular instead of nicely coming in to a point (if you get at all what I mean). The feathers towards the ends of the wings should be more spaced out also, but they're cut outta the pic. So I cannot give a completely fair critique in that matter.
I know its blurred due to the motion, but blarg. Just BLARG.
And theres the lack of background. I can see that sun back there, but in order for me to see all the details of the rays I need to tilt around the screen alot to see it in all its entirety. Tilt ur laptop screen way back. Looks cool.
Again, nitpicky, but your the one who asked for a CRITIQUE.
AND THE RUNDOWN. Judges?
Vision: 4 stars. Hes movin abit fast so itsa bit blurry, so vision isn't exactly 100%. Can't give you all 5 stars.
Originality: 2 stars. You drew a already existing Pokemon thats based on a real bird in a realistic fashion. You know ai hates these new Gens. XP
Technique: 3 1/2 stars.
Impact: 5 stars. Cuz that Braviary's gunna impact into mah face after you sent it after meh fer makin this critique. D:
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Clicky the link to see the Bald Eagle in motion and studies it alots before eating my head off. Obviously not u Alex, you sent me the linkz. I mean...the OTHERS. :0
So all in all, GREAT job. Favorited.
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This is incredible!!! I barely see art like this, this is truely
A-MAZE-ING!!
(umm... what's Bells Palsy???)
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Thank you very very much!
Bells palsy is when one side, or both sides, of the face are paralyzed for up to 6 months to a year. i've had it twice 
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Ohh... that must suck... hope it gets better, and keep up the good work!! 
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THAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANKS!!!!!!
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Nice! I really like the outline-free style! I had to do that in my art class last year too. It's a pain, but I think it makes the resulting picture look much more realistic. Anyway, between the lack of outlines and the awesome textures, this looks amazing! Great job!
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The newest pokemon are mostly quite rubbish. Braviary is deffinatley one of my faves of this gen. And this Artwork is Superb. Win. Amazing Job!
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So sorry if the critique came off as a tad bit harsh in some bits. Its hard for me not to stare at a piece of artwork for a long time and see stuff that doesn't really please me. I find everything I draw actually horribly flawed. I'm my own worst critic.
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Thank you very much!
I actually got the pose from this video: [link]
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That's so cool, it's an awesome way that you did that.
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Indeed it is! And its about to crash into us!! *runs*
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Thank you very much! ^^
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Alex this is amazing!!! Alot more realistic than some of your other Pokemon stuff i really love the style. Definitely continue like this!
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Thankies!!! I've been meaning to practice drawing more realistically, and I'm very happy with the result.
How are you doing? I hope you're feeling better since we last talked.
Anyway, want me to draw one for you Nick? I'm having a brain fart, which pokemon are you again?
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ESPEON!!!!!!!!!!!!! And yeah im doing infinitely better.
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Ohhh yeeeeaaaaaaaaa!
And i'm really happy to hear that. i was worried about you for a while, my son :3. You're going back to Dartmouth, yes?
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good. Cause if you weren't I'd kick yer BUTT
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