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Hi, I've just stumbled upon this beautiful picture and had to leave my thoughts! I hope you don't mind. β‘
The composition here is perfect. The angle and the way the model is laying fit nicely together. I think the parts that work best for me are the way you've positioned the pedals in a curve and the way the sheets curve in the opposite direction. Your lighting is spectacular and is what makes this portrait hit the nail on the head. It creates a glow to the model's face and compliments her expression so well.
For me the weak points are the opened sheets near the hip bone and leg, but I'm guessing you did it like that for conceptual reasons? Being open like that, I wish the pedals on the right were on her skin more and not in the fold of the fabric. For me that would have been better, but I also like how they are symmetrical to the pedals on the right.
Finally, the grain in the fullview is strong. I'm not sure if that is because of the camera you were using or a filter you applied, but I think it could be toned down a bit, or even placed selectively about the image at this strength.
Overall, this is a stunning portrait and I'm glad to have seen it! Thank you for sharing.e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h⦠" width="15" height="13" alt="
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thank you so much for your critique! ^.^ It was very helpful and i was so glad to get to read it. Sadly the graininess comes from me trying to fix the exposure. ive been having this problem in a lot of my shots and am still trying to figure out how to resolve that. i am defenitely far, far away from being a proffessional photographer so I'm still working out the kinks. : P
i am glad you enjoyed this piece! and again, thank you so much.
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awww! 
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Agreed and agreed. Great model and great photographer. I really think you found a niche of sorts with this shoot. I think this is one of the best of the series to.
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thank you
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My pleasure!
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Holy Crap! This is beautiful!!! When I lose a few, will you do a racy/sexy photo shoot with me? *bats eyelashes*
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haha yes my dear, i certainly will.
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Thanks darlin! You rock my world! I have so many pretty things! we could take pictures for an entire weekend.
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Sweet! Oh, and btw, my parents are willing to pay you for professional ones. Holding is my mum's favourite picture of me. Like ever. Since baby pictures.
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Im glad she likes it!
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Yup yup! She rarely likes pics of me, so thanketh thee ever so much!
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awww -blushes- why thanks, doll.
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-blushes- awww thanks doll
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ha, i thought the first comment didn't go through. oops.
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i face the same prob too sometimes
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