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Published: 2010-06-12 03:35:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 15
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Not sure what category this goes to so, tell me if i'm wrong!This is a pic for one of my MANY poems. It is amazing what a lack of things to do in reading class will go to a person.
Well, this one is called Start, hence the title. I will try to make pics, or at least post, all of my poems.
FYI, first try at water.
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Awww that's such a wonderful poem!!
I loved it and I love the image you drew as well. The colors of the sky are so wonderful and for a first attempt at water I think it looks fantastic! I love how the two of them are silhouettes as well.
So cute!!
The poem has a very nice flow to it as well, and I like how you spaced it out.
Do you write often?
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That you for feedback! It very nice.
And yes, I do write quite a bit. I have a handful of other poems. Here's one called "First Love."
The rain poured down
The night you left
You left me standing
A broken heart in my chest
I wonder about you
Each night and each day
I hopped and I played
That you would stay
You were the first
But you wonβt be the last
Your memories linger
They darken my past
I loved you dearly
You didnβt love me back
I might as well forget
You are my past
I'm also writing a couple novels but those haven't gotten very far
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Any time =]
Ooo that's a very nice poem, I also like the flow
and rhyme scheme you had in it and the stanzas are all
written nicely =]
How long have you been writing for?
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Uh, well lets see. If I'm 14, I've been writing for....around two and halve years. the poems were written in December of last year.
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Ohhh very nice!
Have you written anything recently?
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Well, as of late, I've had a serious case of writer's block. All that I've written in the past few months is a crappy fanfic called "Precious Jewel" Writing class might have something to do with it though. just read these and you'll find out. [link]
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Ohhhh writer's block! >_< I hate getting that =[
Maybe you should try writing something random, sometimes that works for me. Or even browse through some deviations here, when you find the right one, the words will start forming and before you know it you'll have written something!
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Sounds like it should work. I'll have to try that at school today. Thabks! =^_^=
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