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Lightning shot across the sky, illuminating the two wolves who were walking home."Come on Vail, we need to get home before it rains!" The yellow wolf called.
"Keep your fur on! We'll get there in plenty of time!" The other wolf called. Another flash of lightning illuminated the sky. A huge clap of thunder followed. The golden wolf jumped.
"Vail, I'm going!" She yelled. She was about to leap into a run when searing pain shot through her hind leg. A horrendous yelp escaped her mouth.
"You're not going anywhere!" Vail growled as she spit out fur. Tanya turned to look at her wound. She had three scratch marks on her hip and a gash on her leg.
"What is wrong with you Vail!? We're goign to die out here!" Tanya screamed.
Vail let out a low growl and crouched, preparing to spring at Tanya. Tanya's ears went back.
"Vail," she said, her voice shaky.
"I've had enough of you Tanya! You're done!" And with that, she lunged. Tanya lifted her front paws and threw vail onto her back. In a second, she was on top of her. She lashed out, her teeth bared and snapped at Vail's neck. She caught fur and ripped it bak. Vail yelped and slashed at her eye. Tanya yelped and struck vail with her hind paw, slashing her side.
"No, you're the one who's done!" Tanya said. Vail smiled evily at her. She lifted her hind paws and kicked Tanya's stomach. Tanya gasped, searching for air that wasn't there. After Tanya had caught her breath, she lunged at Vail again. They rolled down a hill, hitting rocks along the way. Tanya lashed out with her paw and slashed Vail's eye. Vail was gasping for breath and her breath's were getting shallower by the second.
"I will not kill you," Tanya said, "I am above that. But I hope that one wolf some day will take a good chunk out of your ass." And with that, Tanya jumped off of her and ran back up the hill. A flash of lightning illuminated the injured Vail, laying on the cliff edge, bleeding from her wounds. And Tanya's bloody pawprints leading back to the camp.
Another piece of vent art. I'm having very mixed feelings about this whole thing with my ex-best friend. And right now I'm mad. So I hope this picture represents that. I think it does. Sorry for the crappy background and coloring. Hints and tips and critiques are very appriciated guys. Thanks.
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Comments: 19
SoulOfFire123 [2009-05-28 17:01:46 +0000 UTC]
That was a great story. Personal experiance is a good way to make storys but I'm not so sure that you should be talking about your friend like that. Even if she is your ex-best friend.
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MaiLadyFire In reply to SoulOfFire123 [2009-05-28 18:04:53 +0000 UTC]
And I know. I just needed to vent a little bit. I've had a crap load of stuff on my plate right now. Thankfully, it's summer
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SoulOfFire123 In reply to MaiLadyFire [2009-05-28 18:08:28 +0000 UTC]
cool down in the nice pools. i hear ya
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MaiLadyFire In reply to SoulOfFire123 [2009-05-28 18:12:08 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. And I'm not really mad anymore so...
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MaiLadyFire In reply to SoulOfFire123 [2009-05-28 17:52:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I personally don't think it's one of my best.
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SoulOfFire123 In reply to MaiLadyFire [2009-05-28 18:05:48 +0000 UTC]
it's ok I know how it is. It's really an artist thing sometimes you create something and it's truly amazing but you don't think so. so don't worry about it.
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MaiLadyFire In reply to SoulOfFire123 [2009-05-28 18:06:56 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Sometimes we're to hard on ourselves. Ya know?
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Fuzzyfezz [2009-05-28 16:52:14 +0000 UTC]
So, is the vrail wolf your ex-best friend. Personally I like the wolves and their coloring although the bg could use a little work
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MaiLadyFire In reply to Fuzzyfezz [2009-05-28 17:49:41 +0000 UTC]
I know. My BG's suck right now. I need better paper. And more creativity would help too. And yes, she is. Although, she could become my best friend again. If she wanted to
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Fuzzyfezz In reply to MaiLadyFire [2009-05-28 18:10:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah, I thought you were mad at her. I mean teh story was really powerful and I thought u kinda hated her? If you wanna talk about it you can rant on my wall
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MaiLadyFire In reply to Fuzzyfezz [2009-05-28 18:11:43 +0000 UTC]
I was. But the more I thought about it. The more I realized that I was mad about what happend to sepearte us. Not about what either of us did.
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Fuzzyfezz In reply to MaiLadyFire [2009-05-28 18:14:38 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I know the feeling. Im lost a good friend once. When we both entered high school we kinda grew apart and then lost contact. I started thinking she was a bratt for getting more caught up with her new friends and not mentioning me whenever we chatted. It came to the point where it became a chore to talk to her I knew she would yell at me for something I typed that she found insensitive she was just to touchy and said I didn't care about her. But she couldn't be more wrong. I didn't admit it though, I just couldn't I was to mad and then I was tired of fighting and gave up on her. It's been hard ever since
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MaiLadyFire In reply to Fuzzyfezz [2009-05-28 18:19:05 +0000 UTC]
I've felt the same way. Sometimes I really hate HS. I'm glad I'm on break. And I wish me and this friend hadn't lost our friendship. There's so many things I miss about it. Like having someone to tell everything to and to hang out with during summer when everyone else is busy. And I wish we could be friends again. And one of my friends told me you should never give up on the ones you love because you may loose them forever. And I really care about this friend too. I didn't want to loose her. I was a bratt and I admitt that. And I was being to sensitive.
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Fuzzyfezz In reply to MaiLadyFire [2009-05-28 18:22:01 +0000 UTC]
Don't give up on her then. I'm sure she feels the same..She misses being tops with you and you wanting to hang out with her. She's probably made some changes and even though you two live far away from each other she can't let go of 9 years of her life. But, if you two were to become friends again, she wouldn't want this to happen again. She feels like a friendship that works like this is only a burden.
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MaiLadyFire In reply to Fuzzyfezz [2009-05-28 18:24:29 +0000 UTC]
I feel the same way. I don't want to give up on her either. She was my best friend since kindergarden. I'm not that close to anyone else, well maybe my mom, but that's different. And I've made changes too. I've tried to be less sensitive and less bratty and self centered. I wouldn't want it to happen again either. I'm willing to work on it if she is.
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Fuzzyfezz In reply to MaiLadyFire [2009-05-28 18:25:25 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, well its good that you feel that way. You should try and contact her again and see what she says
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MaiLadyFire In reply to Fuzzyfezz [2009-05-28 18:27:40 +0000 UTC]
I don't have her number. And I don't remember it cuz I have no memory. Maybe if she got on IM I could talk to her
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