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Published: 2005-03-15 04:48:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1791; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 128
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This is a commision my friend from the ccn asked me to color for himI inked and colored but he did the original drawing. It has been a long time comming cause of my struggle with coloring metal. I still think I have a long way to go but I am happy with the turn out. There is a comic book convention here in Kansas city, caller Planet con, Me and the guy that drew this will share a table. And of course this will be available as a print. I am hoping things sell this will be my first convention where I have to sit still at the table the whole time and convince people to buy myself. It would be great thoug if the work would sell its self, That would be an amazing feeling.
ANyway please feel free to rip this apart. I want any suggestions you guys have to give on how to make this better.
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This is interesting it's very styled in a way, which allows you to get away with a few things, to me her chin needs to be a bit longer so her mouth can fit her face right, plus I was wondering what happened to her right arm it's missing. all in all it's a great image!
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Wow, this is really well-done. It's amazing to see how you thrive even outside of your element.
Keep it up!
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Then only thing I see that would need work is the highlight on her extended leg. It should follow the contour of her thigh. 
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hey arie nice piece. a few observations. mind you this is a comic piece so these may not matter.
1.the underside of her boob is dark, yet there is bright glowing opening underneath them. should they be lit up a bit?
2.i would like to see more of her shape. seems like the lower portions are lost in the darkness of the background.
3.shadows from the gun on her leg would bring another dimension to your piece.
4.her hair seems to be lit from below yet her face still is lit from above.
the one thing i love...the latex look of her outfit...im envious.
where is this con at in KC? maybe i can head up there and check it out. havent been to a comic con since my days back in texas.
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THANKS YOU!!!!
You are the MAN!! I don't think I would have never noticed the Breast thing. Tha is whai I get for going the gun last.
I wasn't sure what you ment though about her lower half getting lost. I mean if you are talking about the line art, well I didn't draw it so I had to work with what I had. I will see if I can fix it.
The hair though I am kinda unsure how to fix it.
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