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Well, here is the second chapter. Sorry it took me so long, the drawing for this one was really a pain but I'm quite happy with it.
As the first chapter, I'd appeciate if you spot misspelled words or grammar mistakes, please let me know so I can fix it.Thanks for reading!
[ GIVE IT ANOTHER SHOT ]
CHAPTER 1: "TWISTED DESTINY" - fav.me/d9ghlaa
CHAPTER 2: "THIS IS REALITY" - fav.me/d9h8t2p
CHAPTER 3: "ALL THE TIME IN THE WORLD" - fav.me/d9hp9xn
CHAPTER 4: "HIDDEN FEARS AND THEORIES" - fav.me/d9ifzos
CHAPTER 5: "FALLING THROUGH MEMORIES" - fav.me/d9imf5h
CHAPTER 6: "THE WHITE KNIGHT AND THE SIDEKICK" - fav.me/d9jtmak
CHAPTER 7: "MEMORIES OF THINGS THAT NEVER HAPPENED" - fav.me/d9jtnhy
CHAPTER 8: "SHATTERED" - fav.me/d9kob3p
CHAPTER 9: "IN ANY TIMELINE" - fav.me/d9ktfvh
CHAPTER 10 - "GIVE IT ANOTHER SHOT" - fav.me/d9lpzn5
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CHAPTER 2
"THIS IS REALITY"
Silence. Tension. The small room was dark and cold, full of cigarette smoke and an unspoken awkwardness and anger.
“Full name, miss?” Asked the detective,intertwining her fingers over the metallic table. Her interlocutor just stared at her with fury, while expelling the smoke of her lungs with defiance.
“Miss, I know you don’t want to be here, neither do I, but this is where we are.” Insisted the detective, frowning at the girl.
“Price” answered the young woman with coldness. “Chloe Price.”
They were at the police station in Arcadia Bay. Chloe was taken to an interrogation room in quality of witness of the shooting that took place in the bathroom at Blackwell Academy hours ago. After she went with Max to the hospital, and girl entered almost immediately to surgery. That’s when the cops took her and she couldn’t say no.
“You’re making this more difficult than it has to be” Said the detective, frowning at her.”If you just cooperate and answer the questions, you can go home. Maybe get some sleep”
Chloe didn’t answer. She just crossed her arms over her chest and looked away, holding her cigarette with frowned lips. This wasn’t the first time in that room, of course, and she knew how things worked, but this time was different. She just wanted to send the detective straight to hell and run back to the hospital.
“If she didn’t make it… I fucking swear I’ll kill Prescott with my bare hands.” She thought.
“I know it’s been a long day for you… how are you feeling?” Asked the detective, trying to smooth her tone. Of course, it didn’t work.
“I’m fucking pissed off.” Said Chloe.“I should be in that hospital taking care of my friend. I don’t even know if she’s fucking alive, you know?”
“Look, I know what you must be going through…”
“Do you? Do you fucking know?” Asked Chloe, getting up all of the sudden and leaning over the table, looking straight at the officer like she was about to hit her. “Did a friend of yours just stepped out of fucking nowhere and took a shot for ya? Do you have any friend that was ready to die for you?”
The detective didn’t answer and Chloe left herself fall again on the chair.
“That’s what I thought” She said, looking away with fury.
“Look… I just need you to answer some questions.” Insisted the detective, with a softer tone this time. “This is important. We really need your cooperation. There is something really bad happening in Arcadia Bay right now. You could help us to help you. And your friend.”
Chloe sighed and crushed her cigarette with strength in the ashtray before looking at the detective again. She knew the detective couldn’t tell her what was happening, but if Nathan was under arrest, it may have something to do with it… and what he wanted to do with her on his room, after he dossed her.
“Ask your questions” She said. “Fast.”
“Tell me everything you know about… Nathan Prescott.”
Chloe clenched her fists, looked coldly at the detective... and started to talk.
She left the police station an hour or so later and almost run to her truck, parked carelessly at the side of the road. She was lucky that the cops didn’t object when she asked to come to the police station with it. Since she was only a witness, the ride in the police car was unnecessary.
She sat on the driver seat and released a deep sigh of desperation, just before she turned on the truck and drove to the hospital as fast as the old vehicle allowed her.
“Don’t think about it. Max’ll be fine. Joyce would have called you if something went wrong.”
She past a stop sign without even looking at the sides and went on, even faster than before.
“I must be cursed, there is no other fucking explanation” She continued, her eyes wet. ”First dad dies, then Max left me, then Rachel disappeared and then Max comes back… and she hella saves my stupid ass in that bathroom… I can’t believe I’m in this fucking nightmare, I will not be able to accept that girl died for me, damn it! If she dies I will fucking strangle Prescott to death myself.”
She parked the truck near the ambulances entrance and jumped off it. She was so rushed that she had to came back to the vehicle when she remembered the journal. She managed to take it, along with Max’s bag, before the police could take it away. She didn’t know why, but the thought of the cops reading the journal that Max wanted so bad to show Chloe make her feel uncomfortable.
The book was on the passenger seat, sticky and stained with Max’s blood. Chloe remembered she was covered by her blood too and tried not to look at the dark red spots in her white t shirt.
“Read my… journal. I’d… explain… everything.”
Max last words still ringed in her head.
“What the hell is this supposed to explain?” Thought Chloe, looking at the stained cover. ”You better be right, Caulfield.”
Chloe found Joyce in the waiting room, with bags under her eyes and a worried look on her face, watching tv. She was alone, sitting on a metallic chair.
“Where is she?” Demanded Chloe, running to her mother. She tried to sound calm, but her broken and trembling voice betrayed her. “Is she alive? What happened?”
“She is still in surgery.” Answered Joyce with a worried look.”It’s been almost four hours now.”
“God fucking damn it!” Chloe punched the wall with a clenched fist and took of her beanie with fury. “I can’t take this anymore. Why are you alone? Where is step-prick?”
If looks could kill, then Chloe would have died in the exact moment Joyce looked at her.
“David.” She emphasized. “He’s still at Blackwell. The police is there with him. Chloe, for god’s sake, take a seat! You’re getting me nervous too.”
“I can’t believe this happened. She was gone… she left! And there she comes back and takes a fucking shot for me. What the hell is this?”
Joyce couldn’t answer. Chloe started to walk along room and finally, exhausted and furious, she took a seat on the far side of it, with Max’s journal in her hands…
“Should I really read this?” She asked herself. “She could tell me herself what happened if she survi… don’t say that, Chloe. Don’t be stupid. She said it would explain everything… what’s that exactly? Why she left? Why she didn’t call or write to me in five years?”
She looked at the journal, unconvinced, angry and hurt. But as always, she couldn’t hate Max for what she have done. Chloe was angry, of course. She felt betrayed and abandoned when she left… but she never hated her friend. She never could, even if she wanted to. Part of her wondered why.
And now… after what Max did… There was no point of being angry for the past. She owed Max her life.
Chloe wiped out the tears of her blue eyes, opened the Journal and started reading, with her hands shaking and looking over the book from time to time to the hallway, where she expected to find a doctor with a smile, saying everything was okay. That Max was okay.
That was until he reached the page in which Max talked about the bathroom… She almost lost her temper when she read about Max’s rewind powers. It was insane, unbelievable, the delirium of a geek… but how on earth she could know that she was on the bathroom? There was impossible for Max to write all that, it just had happened!
“What… the hell is this?”
As she went through the journal, she wasn’t sure what to believe. Max’s journal had everything that happened to her written, it was impossible. How did Max know about Rachel Amber? How did she know about her stepfather? How did she know about Frank and… everything?
And that wasn’t all of it. Max’s descriptions of her were really accurate. The rebellion, the bad attitude, her characteristic smart ass answers… The fact that she thought to stole a gun from David’s locker… how bad Chloe wanted to have Rachel back and how Max wanted to help her find her too… The many times Chloe would have died… if it wasn’t for her power to rewind and save her life… exactly the same way she did at that bathroom. Everything would have made some sense… if it wasn’t impossible.
And then… She dared Max to kiss her. And… Max did?
“What the fuck did I just read?” She thought, trying to ignore the pang in her gut. “Why would she…? Whatever. Keep going, Chloe.”
Then… everything went to shit. Rachel and Frank, together. It was like a stab in her chest, an awful pain in her heart, almost unbearable.
“This can’t be real. This journal… could it be?” She asked herself, looking at the tears wetting the paper in her hands. “If it is, Rachel was just another person that fucked you up. You’re fucking cursed, there is no other explanation. Everybody lies, no exceptions.”
And just a few moments later, she had to swallow her words and cry again, for another reason entirely. Rachel. Dead. Buried in the junkyard. Killed by Nathan Prescott.
"This isn’t real” She said in a whisper. “She can’t be dead, she just… She can’t be…”
Joyce’s voice, sad and shaken took her out of her rumbling.
“Oh, no…”
Chloe looked up. The news were on the tv of the waiting room. There was a reporter, a cute young girl with a microphone in her hand, talking to the camera, but Chloe didn’t listen. She couldn't.
She got up, and the journal fall to the floor, spitting all it’s contempts over it, wide open, as she almost run to the tv in disbelief and read the headline a thousand times until it sank in.
Rachel Amber was found. Dead. Buried in the junkyard… and the self - confessed murderer was Sean Prescott’s little son. Nathan.
Chloe felt herself hitting the ground with her knees, grabbing her head and crying, almost silently. She wanted to shout, to break things, to curse Arcadia Bay and everybody in it, but she couldn’t find her voice. She wanted to be dead in that bathroom instead of feeling this deep and torturing pain.
Not even Joyce’s hug could console her. Nothing would. She cried for what felt like hours on her mother's arms.
When she got back to her feet and returned to her chair, she looked at the journal on the floor. As if she needed more proof that everything was indeed real, while taking all the journal’s contents, there was a polaroid. A single picture of Max and… Chloe. Smiling on the morning light, on her room. She didn’t remember when was the last time she smiled so honestly.
“This is reality then. All of it.” She thought. “This is fucking real…"
“Miss Price?”
Both, Joyce and Chloe looked up. The doctor was on the door frame, with his face wet of sweat and with a worn out expression on his face.
“The surgery was a success.” He announced. “Miss Caulfield is stable now, but unconcious. You can go to see her if you like. She’s in room 203. Did any of you contacted her parents?”
"Oh my fucking god, she's alive!"
Chloe didn’t wait to hear her mother’s answer. She picked up the journal and went to the hallway as fast as she could, with her heart beating fast on her chest. She didn’t know how she was able to cope with the pain and go to see her. Part of her wanted to shut down, mourn Rachel, cry her eyes out… But after all she read, after realizing all that crazy shit that was indeed real... after realizing Max had saved her life, over and over... She couldn't ignore the pun on her chest, the buterflies in her stomach.
At the moment, the only thing she wanted to do was be right next to Max.
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Well, here is the second chapter. Sorry it took me so long, the drawing for this one was really a pain but I'm quite happy with it.
As the first chapter, I'd appeciate if you spot misspelled words or grammar mistakes, please let me know so I can fix it.
Thanks for reading!
[ GIVE IT ANOTHER SHOT ]
CHAPTER 1 - TWISTED DESTINY - fav.me/d9ghlaa
CHAPTER 2 -
CREDITS
All characters belong to Dontnod and Square Enix
Fan art only. No copyright infringement intended.
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Comments: 44
BenRG [2019-05-17 12:23:58 +0000 UTC]
"God... I... I dunno if you're listening right now. I know we've never been chill, you and me but... but Max is a good person; she's a wonderful preson. I don't care less what you do to me. I don't care less what it costs but if you're a good person like Marsh keeps on saying... you'll keep Max alive. Please... Please... Anything, I swear it. I swear it...!"
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CharlieIndigoalpha76 [2017-07-19 00:08:18 +0000 UTC]
So this is the reality if Max was spotted and she was shot instead of Chloe, correct?
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Maiqueti In reply to CharlieIndigoalpha76 [2017-07-23 20:31:22 +0000 UTC]
Yes. She steps up and Nathan shots her by accident.
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CharlieIndigoalpha76 In reply to Maiqueti [2017-07-23 21:59:44 +0000 UTC]
Okay, just testing y theory
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AlunaticsDream [2016-07-07 22:24:30 +0000 UTC]
This is just truly breath taking...I only wished this was in the game. You did a fantastic job filling in the what if gaps...
This is amazing... Chloe has been through so much hell....maybe this could have been different..
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Maiqueti In reply to AlunaticsDream [2016-07-08 03:55:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for reading! Glad youre enjoying the story!
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AlunaticsDream In reply to Maiqueti [2016-07-08 04:09:34 +0000 UTC]
Do you take point commissions or art trades?
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Maiqueti In reply to AlunaticsDream [2016-07-08 05:52:11 +0000 UTC]
I am actually working my way to it. I'll let you know!
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AlunaticsDream In reply to Maiqueti [2016-07-08 20:25:40 +0000 UTC]
will you post a journal about it if you do? I just love your art work ^^
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Maiqueti In reply to AlunaticsDream [2016-07-09 02:27:36 +0000 UTC]
I will certainly post a journal when i do. I'll keep you posted.
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StrangeWandering [2016-06-08 19:23:59 +0000 UTC]
Another awesome edition. Although at the end this part "She couldn't ignore the pun on her chest" I think should be "She couldn't ignore the pain in her chest", unless is was a literal pun on her wearing a skull shirt xD
Love it.
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Maiqueti In reply to StrangeWandering [2016-06-08 22:21:07 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, its possible that you may find mistakes or weird grammar, since my native language is spanish. Thank you for reading and for pointing it out!
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LLKodachiiSama [2016-01-31 15:11:15 +0000 UTC]
They should make this one of the choices in the game!
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Maiqueti In reply to LLKodachiiSama [2016-01-31 19:15:19 +0000 UTC]
I actually was specting something like this to happen... instead I had to let a town get swallowed by the storm... no regrets
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CuriousStraydog [2016-01-12 03:00:39 +0000 UTC]
God, just as depressing as the actual game, I swear. ;-; But well written and so emotionally powerful. All of Chloe's comments while reading the journal are so accurate and also fitting for the situation. Well done! And with the picture, too! The waiting room looks so dang amazing!
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Maiqueti In reply to CuriousStraydog [2016-01-12 03:05:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm eager to know your thoughts about the rest, make sure you leave a comment in the others chapters too.
I think this is one of my best drawings. It took me almost three days to finnish it, but I'm kida proud of the results
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teb1013 [2015-12-21 23:38:07 +0000 UTC]
This fanfic is outstanding, the fact that English isn't your original language is almost impossible to believe! Thank you for doing this for the fans. It's the best I've read. Would Max's journal go back in time with her though. Wouldn't it merely have what Max had written up to the date of the bathroom scene? Of course you're the writer and it can work anyway you see it, and Dontnod left enough unanswered questions so that it can be seen any way you like. Your portrayal of Chloe's desperation and anger is so well handled. Your picture of Chloe is great as well.
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Maiqueti In reply to teb1013 [2015-12-21 23:58:57 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thank you!
Yeah, it's a technicality to be honest. I know that "time travel" through photos doesn't work that way, but I needed something to put Chloe in a position in which she had to believe Max was being honest, and the journal was perfect to do so. And since she had the objects at the cliff and Dontnod didn't explain anything clearly... why not make the objects she carry be affected by her powers too, if they are with her when she comes back? IDK, quantic physics nonsense
I'm glad to hear you think Chloe is well written. It was really a challenge since we don't actually know how she thinks in the game. I had little material to work, so I'm happy with the results
Please, let me know what you think of the rest of the story. I'd love to have as much feedback as I can. Thank you a lot for taking the time to read this and for your encouraging words.
Hope to se you around!
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IG-Gaming [2015-12-14 06:02:23 +0000 UTC]
This is really good to read, set the scene perfectly.
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Maiqueti In reply to ILoveBender101 [2015-12-14 15:22:31 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Keep reading, it gets better
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StaticShockRomeo [2015-12-13 16:47:58 +0000 UTC]
Spoilers
Is everything near the end supposed to be in italics? Also, should where the doctor says "Did any of you contacted her parents?” be "Did any of you contact her parents?”
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Maiqueti In reply to StaticShockRomeo [2015-12-13 17:11:57 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the feedback.
I'll correct that grammar mistake. And no, it's not supposed to be in italics. Sadly, the only way to manage the italics and the rest of the format options is by code and it doesn't work propperly, it's giving me a headache to be honest.
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Grummel83 [2015-12-03 18:24:09 +0000 UTC]
Good with the second part.
I wonder how it would be to read such an journal with parts of your own possible future.
The thing with the journal was a nice touch of the game.
You caught my interest with your story and I'll continue reading.
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Grummel83 In reply to Maiqueti [2015-12-04 20:37:42 +0000 UTC]
I need more time. Too much to read atm.
But I'll take the time to continue asap.
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MahJimmies111 [2015-11-22 21:46:37 +0000 UTC]
You should put this story up on ff.net or AO3. It deserves more exposure.
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Maiqueti In reply to MahJimmies111 [2015-11-22 21:56:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
Glad you liked it! I'll think about it
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Grummel83 [2015-11-22 21:37:07 +0000 UTC]
Good work with the image.
I read the story as soon as I read the first part.
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Maiqueti In reply to Grummel83 [2015-11-22 21:51:05 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm eager to know what you think about it
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Grummel83 In reply to Maiqueti [2015-11-23 21:30:04 +0000 UTC]
Anytime.
Latest on the next weekend I'll read it.
And I promise to tell you my opinion.
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Maiqueti In reply to Tali0Zorah [2015-11-22 17:11:13 +0000 UTC]
Working on it! Stay tuned, I'll upload the next one as soon as I can!
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Maiqueti In reply to neunon [2015-11-22 14:03:46 +0000 UTC]
Of course! Stay tuned, Ill upload the next chapter soon
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Maiqueti In reply to enterprisedavid [2015-11-20 14:25:53 +0000 UTC]
Glad you're enjoying it so far! Stay tuned for more!
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chaosontour [2015-11-20 08:29:33 +0000 UTC]
The drawing is cool and the story itself is really enjoyable to read!
I like where this is going.
Anyways, you should take more time to finish it.
Write it down, then re-read it and you will see that some scene's, besides grammar mistakes, could be written a little different.
Like choice of words and things that happen or done.
Still like.
German countryball: "Gibe moar"
//Edit: Take a note! "Everybody lies, no execption!" <-- very well done. It's the small details that create atmosphere luv it
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Maiqueti In reply to chaosontour [2015-11-20 14:28:02 +0000 UTC]
Hey, thanks for the feedback! Glad you like it!
Do you have any suggestions? I'd really appreciate some help to improve it
The small details are everything, that's what makes the difference I think
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BarbDBarb [2015-11-20 08:04:00 +0000 UTC]
There we go whats better then morning coffee and good story to read
Thanks!
Good job with drawing, looks so amazing
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Maiqueti In reply to BarbDBarb [2015-11-20 14:29:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it so far!
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