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Published: 2014-09-14 18:43:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 7616; Favourites: 117; Downloads: 0
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Description This is for the GetDailyDeviations  "To Tell a Story" contest
This is a fanart of Nitori Kawashiro from Touhou, I do not own this character. The following story is my original idea and is not related in any way to the character's canonical story.

Humans have always striven for eternal life.
To a scientist like her, immortality was a lifetime goal.  When she finally created a machine that allowed her mind to leave her dying mortal body and reside inside a crude but everlasting cybernetic construct, she knew she had not only achieved man’s wildest dream, but also found the key to unlimited knowledge. With her newly found immortality, she passionately studied the universe night and day, hoping to unlock all its secrets. Cheating death was not enough for her: now she wanted to know everything.

As the last humans on earth disappeared, the gloomy dead silence finally woke her up from the pursuit for knowledge that had lasted for centuries. She took notice of her surrounding: it was quiet. At first she was astonished at how much things had changed since the last time she observed Earth and uncovered its final mysteries. Then she started feeling lonely, and finally as more of her inner human awoke, fear dominated her mind. She was the last person on Earth, but she was not even a human.

She started crying. She cried for months, but no tears were shed…


Knowledge is meaningless to her if she could not share it with anyone, and she thought it was time to stop the meaningless pursuit. Her mechanical body might be tireless, but her human mind was worn out. Holding in her arms her former body that had been frozen in stasis, she realized she no longer wanted immortality. She desired eternal rest. However, immortality seemed almost irreversible, and so again, she started her studies, more determined than ever.

She had spent a life time looking for eternal life.
Now she would readily spend eternity searching for her final rest.

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Comments: 25

AlgaeNymph [2015-01-25 20:14:17 +0000 UTC]

Why not learn to create people?  It'd solve the problem of being lonely.

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CascadianPatriot In reply to AlgaeNymph [2018-02-14 21:07:17 +0000 UTC]

+1

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GingerrattennaXD [2015-01-25 14:05:11 +0000 UTC]

kinda reminds me of the song "kokoro" 

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MakashiVT In reply to GingerrattennaXD [2015-01-25 15:29:12 +0000 UTC]

yes, that is a great song thank you for the fav

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GingerrattennaXD In reply to MakashiVT [2015-01-25 15:45:21 +0000 UTC]

no problem 

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TheDarkbreaker [2014-10-18 15:07:39 +0000 UTC]

RandomNumbers' tag brought me here. As a fan of the tragedy of immortality/long life, I can safely say I love the hell out of this, and you've done a spectacular job of capturing the melancholy and sorrow of true immortality. It's made more striking by the comparison between Nitori's original personality and this timeworn, heartbroken version of her.

Good job!

...also I really like the environment and background you drew.

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MakashiVT In reply to TheDarkbreaker [2014-10-18 15:37:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I am glad my work can inspire so much! 

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TheDarkbreaker In reply to MakashiVT [2014-10-29 17:58:17 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem! Just keep on doing it, and I think everyone will be happy. XD

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RandomNumbers5902672 [2014-10-18 14:18:54 +0000 UTC]

I would say that since she's a kappa, Nitori is technically immortal, as long as people believe in them, but using this alternate interpretation was pretty good, that was a good story you told not only about immortality but also loneliness, it was a very interesting work! (tagging MagnumPhoenixZX  it reminded of your alternate interpretation for her).

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TheDarkbreaker In reply to RandomNumbers5902672 [2014-10-18 22:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Good taste, RN, and thanks for the heads up!

Nitori aside, you know I have a thing for themes of immortality, so good call! XD

Immortality and loneliness go hand in hand, as do some...selfdestructive tendencies, and I'm pleased to see it was handled so well here! Granted, I think the main difference between our versions is that while this one here is tragic and melancholic, mine went full megalomaniacal sociopath, burying her hurt behind walls of steel and her mad science. Kind of like introvert vs extrovert if you think about it.

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MakashiVT In reply to RandomNumbers5902672 [2014-10-18 14:39:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you like my work. I always want to go wild with fan arts, so I tend to redesign and make alternate interpretation for the character. I feel like my art is more unique that way

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MuseRose [2014-09-23 03:08:58 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful!! I am almost speechless by how wonderful it is

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MakashiVT In reply to MuseRose [2014-09-23 03:12:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the support! Also thanks for the faves and watch!

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MuseRose In reply to MakashiVT [2014-09-23 03:16:21 +0000 UTC]

no problem!

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Willow-San [2014-09-21 19:32:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow, awesome *____*

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MakashiVT In reply to Willow-San [2014-09-22 02:28:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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L-Y-N-S [2014-09-21 04:28:54 +0000 UTC]

The composition looks amazing and the overall mood of this artwork is clear. Very nice work

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MakashiVT In reply to L-Y-N-S [2014-09-21 05:16:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the feedback!

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Frank-Beer [2014-09-20 10:44:30 +0000 UTC]

Amazing artwork, looks truly great. An instant

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MakashiVT In reply to Frank-Beer [2014-09-20 13:14:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you! I'm still learning so I really appreciate your support!

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DGsilv3r [2014-09-15 18:52:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow!
The way you did the shading and lighting made me think this was a 3D render!

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MakashiVT In reply to DGsilv3r [2014-09-16 03:12:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you I have several recent works with the same style, please check them out if you are interested

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ElvishChozo [2014-09-15 04:27:10 +0000 UTC]

Cyberpunk + Touhou = insta fave

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MakashiVT In reply to ElvishChozo [2014-09-15 04:29:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you I do a lot of touhou fanart, please check them out if you are interested

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Lihaaja [2014-09-14 20:00:15 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!

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