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makkochi — Chubby Blood elf WIP
Published: 2012-03-23 06:25:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 2390; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 31
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Work in progress of my chubby-bunny Blood elf, Erodari.I need suggestions on what to add / what can make this pop out.
I'm gunna re-do her face. Also need to re-do the position of her leg nearest to the floor. I tried to make it look like...
I can't explain, bent? Idunno...
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I like your style! The way your lines flow along her shape work with her extra chub around her thighs and stomach and i think you have a pretty solid understanding of it so far. But I do agree the leg nearest to the floor could use some work with the foreshadowing of it, since it's supposed to be bent.
I think if you were to change the upper leg into the bent on it'd help the pose flow a bit more, such as this [link] It'd would give a bit more curve to her bottom and make her pose a bit more interesting to look at.
Also I'm unsure of how long her hair is but maybe giving her hair a bit more hair strands curling or laying across her shoulder would make her hair seem a bit more flow-ish. But that's only a suggestion! I'm pretty positive you can make this POP with good colouring and focusing on shades and maybe trying some new paintery style experimentation with this, it'd be a perfect pose to work with!
Good luck, hope it was some what helpful!
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Thank you so much~ You have no idea how useful this all is to me. I've been having troubles with this picture for a few hours now. I couldn't exactly put what was off about her legs after many attempts to make them thick & still have a natural flow to them & the picture you linked will help greatly~<3
As for the hair, I have no clue what I am trying to do with it so if you have any other hair style suggestions, be it long or short - I would be happy to hear.
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You're welcome!
As for her hair I think defining where the hair split is would really help
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Such as where her hair parts and such as in the image linked above.
[link] defining the flow of direction of the hair is very important unless she has very spiky and ruff hair usually it'd be more of a BOUNCE and CURVE in her hair's ends :]
again though this is fantasty anything is usual possible, but I personally think the long hair matches her quite well, just work on the flow and it should come out a bit more smoothly.
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