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Makushi23 — DARR challenge 3 pt 1
Published: 2015-12-23 02:17:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 1246; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 1
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Dan: Ok, take a donkey cart, and fly to hawaii
Kim: Hawaii!!!, OMG, that place is so pretty
Dan: Yeah yeah yeah, it's really cute and stuff, but we have to go now if we want to be first at least one time! We have to get to the carts first!
Lauren: Hi, you are late
Julio: Come on Abel, i want to be the one riding the horse
Abel: What?, it's a donkey, not a horse, and you won't be the one riding it
Dan: (facepalm) God
Kim: So, guys, what do you think of the other competitors, have you seen Chelsea and Luna?, the roommates?, don't you think their relationship is weird, i mean, it's pretty obvious that Luna hates Chelsea, but Chelsea keeps thinking that they're like the best of friends
Dan: Yeah...sound really annoying (stares at Kim)
Kim: I know right?, and not only...(sees trixie's phone) ahhhhh, OMG, that phone is so CUTE, can i see it, pretty please?
Trixie: umm...sure? here
(Kim starts playing with trixie's phone, meanwhile, a rock is getting close to the cart's wheel)
TO BE CONTINUED
Watch the construction workers and the tech geeks perspective
Construction Workers:
Tech Geeks:
Roommates (mentioned):
Donkey cart BG:
Starting point BG:
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Comments: 18
UR welcome! I'm just saying your TD Character Design is really improving! Good job!
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Great job sweetie,
and I love the parallel you
Used with the roomies!
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when i first saw the roomies, i knew they were similar to the new friends XD
thanks
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There's Kim with her beautiful puppy eyes <3
Hahaha I can't help but laugh every time I see Dan XD his expressions are priceless And the facepalm was well diserved
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oh i know, my baby is almost expresionless XD
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Oh no, I think Kim done something she shouldn't of done
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you will find out later
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Ooohhh.... I like where this is going.
The only thing I would suggest is maybe a little dialogue/word balloons. That would make it even stronger than it already is.
Other than that, good job. I look forward to the next part.
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yeah, maybe i should start doing it that way again, thanks for the tip
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No problem. Like I said, we get the gist of what's going on and I like it. But some dialogue will give it a little spice.
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well, the dialogue is in the description but i guess i should put it in the comic itself again
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Boom the phone is gone! xD
Kim's face is adorable!
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haha thanks 
you see kim's adorable face now, but later, she will have a big change of personality >:-D
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