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#desire #entranced #love #lust #passion #romance #want
Published: 2015-12-08 06:43:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 487; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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Do you know what I want of you?I want your rhythm
And the pulse upon your hips
The feeling of your skin close against me
The ripples of your form to leave no guess
I want you to tempt me
And assuage me
To trace your sweat with my caress
I want you to drown me
And consume me
Ever more and never less
I want your kiss
To steal your lips
To last for but a moment until forever
Leave my mind for your soul to engage
I want you to entrance me
And dance for me
For my form to be your stage
I want your fire
And your passion
To fill an endless heaven's page
I want your sense
And your emotion
The bloodrush flushed within your flesh
Vibrant, lush, radiant to the touch
I want you to embrace me
And manipulate me
Lay my heart against your crutch
I want you to push me
And pull me
Make me wish for you too much
I want your burning gaze upon me
Till my mind has been percussed
I want you to tell me
Are you love or am I lust?
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Powerful stuff! Love and lust both here I would say. Just to say I read it through several times and each time I read it I feel it more. I am most impressed this piece of writing.
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You are welcome.Β I liked the way you didn't hold back!Β
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Everyone is talented on here, it's unbelievable ...( I want to comment on everyone's work)Β This one is quite different from the others, and it has a very mature (not that you aren't )feeling to it. Imagery on this is ridiculously good, and it's definitely another side of your creativity. ( You shouldn't be shy ), because this was astonishing and it should be illegal lol ( for how good it is).
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It's overwhelming how much positive feedback this piece has gotten; thanks for adding to it, Ley. ^^ Here's to hoping someday it becomes a crime! xD
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This is absolutely astounding! Your diction and imagery are beautiful and the message powerful and relatable. This poem has a very mature feeling to it as the distinction between love and lust can be a very blurred line. This poem is so good that I had to download it toΒ my computer so I could see it whenever I want. You made me start a "favorite poem" folder on my laptop and yours as the first entry. I wish I could fav. this more than once, it truly is amazing.Β Β Β Β Β Β Β
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absolutely one of the most gorgeous poems I've ever read.
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This is pretty much my life right now... I love it! "For my form to be your stage" is such a great line!
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That was one of the last lines I came up with; took me a while to think of. Happy you enjoyed and thank you for the fav. ^^
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There's a German saying that goes "Gut Ding braucht Weile", which means that good things always take longer to complete
You're very welcome! ^^
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Honestly, I thought this was written beautifully! There's times where it's hard to differ between the two, and you did an amazing job at showing that sometimes we can confuse mental with physical love.
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Thank you! It can indeed be difficult to distinguish. I tend to hold a lot of old fashioned values for that very reason.
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lovely! you really tackle a lot of complicated feelings here, love versus desire, an endless cycle that tends to blur the lines. not inappropriate at all! beautifully written, as always
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I wish I could come up with more creative ways of saying thank you. xD Glad you like it.
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haha it's alright, love, that's enough 
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wow :0 this is so passionate and emotional and well written and I love it!
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Thank you for saying so! I went through a lot of self-debate as to if it was appropriate to post. 
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It's gorgeous, I'm glad you decided to post it! ^u^
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Thank you-- for the fav as well.
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