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Published: 2005-02-22 05:26:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 330; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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+RECOMPENSE+Lies roll of your tongue with ease
You do and say whatever you please
You care so little for human emotion
You lock away all love and devotion
Your soul is black, your heart is too
And they reflect these things you do
Distorted crimes upon the heart
Your indifference tore my soul apart
My innards are left broken and screaming
While youβre exterior remains cruel and demeaning
Taking whatever you wish to take
Setting eyes on you was my mistake
Now I have to recompense
The toll you took was quite immense
Forever shall I feel disdain
For your actions that bore my pain
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it's nice to see some work from you..very nicely done ^_^..I really like the rhyming scheme...flows really nicely..and I agree with the person above..this really would make a good song
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a lot of people said that... thanks so much
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u're quite welcome ^_^
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It's been a while since I've seen poetry for you, and I'm delighted to see you trying your hand at words again! This piece has a great lyrical flow to it, it would make a great goth/industrial/punk song. Here's hoping your inspiration is plentiful. Ciao.
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haha thanks! so many people say that it would make a good song, all i need is a hook...
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