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Malicious-Monkey β€” The Gardener - Creation Myth

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Published: 2015-02-08 23:15:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1513; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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Description In the beginning, Ilion was only red and black. The air was toxic to breathe and nothing could be eaten. There were no people.

Four visitors came to Pandaros from the stars. They lived in a bubble of their own air, harvesting plants and animals for purposes unknown.

The devil’s archer saw them stealing its food, and with a volley of arrows banished the visitors to the stars.

But one man was hit. Tethered to the trees, trapped by the archer, he had to be left behind.

In revenge, he produced a handful of green seeds and tossed them in the air. They germinated instantly on contact with the soil and spread across the continent. To this day, vazhuka cardamom thrives in the rashlands and riverbanks of Pandaros.

The seeds grew inside of him and strangled the tether of the devil’s archer until it rotted away. He became the Gardener, and white flowers bloomed anywhere his feet touched ground. Once freed, the Gardener looked up and saw a falling star.

The star crashed onto the shores of Aeneas and nine people spilled out. The Gardener was lonely, so he flew across the sea to meet them.

But the people ignored him. They harvested the plants and animals, walked the shores in a bubble of their own air, and grew green plants in vats of their own water.

The Gardener was furious. He called forth the lightning and liberated the brassicas, cabbages, and potatoes. The visitors were banished, once more, to the stars.

Over time, the green plants spread across the world and changed the air. When man visited Ilion for the third and last time, they found the air was breathable and the plants good to eat. Grateful, they welcomed the Gardener into their colony with open arms.

This is my first real experiment with the Future Ilion idea I've toyed with in the past. Like many myths, this one is rooted in history .

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Comments: 17

BittyKitty1 [2015-09-29 03:35:04 +0000 UTC]

I love the way SpaceMan God is kinda doing a sort of... Celestial bellyflop over the ocean. It looks like something from a storybook, and I love it.

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Malicious-Monkey In reply to BittyKitty1 [2015-10-01 21:08:07 +0000 UTC]

Haha, celestial bellyflop.

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Archipithecus [2015-02-11 00:11:17 +0000 UTC]

So Rashid became a creator god? That's pretty cool. So, if Terran plants changed the atmosphere of Ilion, how did the native life react? Did they survive?

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Malicious-Monkey In reply to Archipithecus [2015-02-11 01:17:56 +0000 UTC]

Him plus elements of other people who were involved. Native life adapts just fine but not without a good number of extinctions. To put it in perspective, fewer species go extinct as a result of human activity on Ilion than on Earth.

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Archipithecus In reply to Malicious-Monkey [2015-02-11 12:45:37 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad that Ilion was able to make the transition relatively unscathed. How different is the air again? Before humans, that is.

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Malicious-Monkey In reply to Archipithecus [2015-02-11 14:45:39 +0000 UTC]

More CO2, more nitrogen compounds, thicker. A while back I started to work out a nitrogen cycle but I got busy with other stuff. Maybe I'll revisit that someday.

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Archipithecus In reply to Malicious-Monkey [2015-02-11 23:08:00 +0000 UTC]

I would be interesting in seeing that.

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Axel-Astro-Art [2015-02-09 05:07:17 +0000 UTC]

"(...) man visited Ilion for the third and last time"
The Phoenix mission was forgotten?

Ilion was really terraformed? A pre-industrial society can live there in that far future? After reading this I get a strong sensation that the human civilization on Ilion it's backwards, or even primitive, when compared to modern Earth standards.Β 
Or perhaps it's that a LONG time has passed. Perhaps 10 or 20 thousand years? That would be more than enough to distort true facts into myth. I'm thinking of something along the lines of the way Earth and Aurora are barely remembered on Asimov's "Prelude to Fundation".Β 

And talking about your universe... what happened with the other few promising planets discovered along with Ilion? By this far future they have been explored or colonized? If they were alive, mankind avoided the mistakes they made on Ilion? Or the fear of doing the same things again stopped them from walking on them?Β 

All this is great. I'm enjoying very much this project and if you ever publish a book, I promise I will buy it.Β 

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Malicious-Monkey In reply to Axel-Astro-Art [2015-02-09 05:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Yup, and Odyssey II and III, and Helen of Troy...at least by the culture that produced this myth. The subject of the myth is a composite of all the people at fault for seeding Ilion with green plants: the botanist who grew the cardamom, the man who brought live seeds to the ground, the angry crewmate who spilled them, the natural forces and engineering problems that destroyed the Aeneid I greenhouse, etc etc.

I am thinking a very long time. 5-10 thousand years. The amout of information and technology lost is similar to 9th pass Pern if you've read that, with additional changes to language and even physiology, due to living on a tidally locked planet that is only barely habitable to us. The colonists' first generation children had to be modified somewhat to survive without canned air and food supplements. In the future there are tribal states, theocracies, bustling cities, technological booms, and empires.

The other planets, many were found to be uninhabitable. The promising ones were a water world called Heracleion and a hothouse called Pompeii, which upon exploration was found to host extremophilic life. There were no manned missions to Pompeii, only a series of probes. The Earthlike planet Tel Kabra has a sophont but the Beagle probe was shot down on arrival. Distracted by Ilion, humans took a long time to make contact, but that's for another story.

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Axel-Astro-Art In reply to Malicious-Monkey [2015-02-09 06:16:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for such an informative reply!Β 
What can you tell me about Atlantis?
Too good that Pompeii it's alive. I like to think of it as some kind of super-Io. I suppose the lifeforms are just bacteria-like things?

By your far future, how much mankind has expanded into the cosmos? Is there some kind of galactic empire or are they still on a stage of a small sphere of colonies radiating from the Solar System into the nearest stars?

Sorry for so many questions, but I'm very enthusiastic about this project of yours.Β 

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Malicious-Monkey In reply to Axel-Astro-Art [2015-02-09 14:30:07 +0000 UTC]

Questions are my favorite!

"What can you tell me about Atlantis?"

Nothing yet, except that I changed the name to one of a real sunken civilization.

"I suppose the lifeforms are just bacteria-like things?"

Yes, and biofilms, prolific enough to visibly change the landscape. I might do some art of it in the future but other than that there's little to write about.

"By your far future, how much mankind has expanded into the cosmos?"

Only as far as subluminal travel can get them. This means a few colonies that, eventually, lose contact with one another as civilizations go through booms and busts.

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Axel-Astro-Art In reply to Malicious-Monkey [2015-02-09 22:07:33 +0000 UTC]

I would like to know more about Pompeii's environment. What color it's the sky? And the soil? It's someting like Io, Mustafar or just a very hot Yellowstone? It has moons?Β 

Which are the other planets of Ilion's star system? Ilion it's the only living planet on it? Aren't there Enceladus-like or Europa-like moons somewhere around a gas giant?Β 

Are you planning to cast a light on Illion's past? Its fossil record or even some prehistoric scenes?Β 

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Malicious-Monkey In reply to Axel-Astro-Art [2015-02-09 23:38:55 +0000 UTC]

Past Ilion...now there's a rabbit hole I could get lost in. Other planets? I've avoided talking about them deliberately. There are problems with putting a habitable rocky world around Barnard's Star that are better left ignored than explained badly. Pompeii, I picture pretty much exactly as you said it, a very hot Yellowstone. Moons might be necessary to generate tidal forces, or I could make it a moon itself.

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Rodlox [2015-02-09 00:36:00 +0000 UTC]

quite enjoyable.

summarizes the history of Earth life on Ilion in such a way as to make it easy to remember.

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Whachamacallit1 [2015-02-09 00:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, this has several pretty big implications. I'm going to guess something must have gone horribly wrong during the colonization period so that people have turned real documented history into such a myth.

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Malicious-Monkey In reply to Whachamacallit1 [2015-02-09 02:02:10 +0000 UTC]

Time. Time happened.

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Trex841 [2015-02-08 23:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow. That's kind of depressing when you think of what really happened.

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