HOME | DD
Published: 2003-11-15 07:06:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 91; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 17
Redirect to original
Description
This is a fairly new one...I was trying to analyze why my family is the way they are...I kinda made some answers for myself, or assumptions, mind you....but it all worked out in my head after all.Related content
Comments: 9
azrael0033 [2003-11-16 12:14:38 +0000 UTC]
You could totally put that to some music and rock out with your cock out! I like it so much I have to run to the toilet but won't
👍: 0 ⏩: 3
malignancy In reply to azrael0033 [2003-11-16 20:57:30 +0000 UTC]
Damn it! I didn't mean to put that twice.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
malignancy In reply to azrael0033 [2003-11-16 20:56:01 +0000 UTC]
the toilet?lol cool, I never thought of it as a sing-song, but perhaps I could try. Hell, I often have to make do with making lyrics for industrial powernoise...it's too fucking hard, but they always like the outcome. Thanks for the fav on it as well.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
malignancy In reply to azrael0033 [2003-11-16 20:55:03 +0000 UTC]
the toilet?lol cool, I never thought of it as a sing-song, but perhaps I could try. Hell, I often have to make do with making lyrics for industrial powernoise...it's too fucking hard, but they always like the outcome. Thanks for the fav on it as well.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
rockisdeaddclxvi [2003-11-16 04:20:26 +0000 UTC]
i like your commentary at the end there.."poets often write..." ...sometimes, i think poets come off too seriously..which isn't always bad...you've got to sometimes..but the fact you can step back and sorta satire yourself in this separates you from most other poets i read..very nice...
dw
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
malignancy In reply to rockisdeaddclxvi [2003-11-16 08:27:28 +0000 UTC]
I totally agree....I find myself taking everything way too serious, perhaps that's the "Goth" side of me, but I do like to drop my mind back into reality every now and then...the clouds can be too much at times...
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Walpurgis-Nocturnal [2003-11-15 07:41:05 +0000 UTC]
i like that one a lot...
"I overstep the bounds of many unfulfilled dreams"
I have felt that way before...
broken dreams and broken promises,
parents who didn't care
all of it was there
but I guess even i didn't care..
.. dunno where that came from, oh well.. yeh, I'm familiar with the feeling expressed in that line. good job.. i like it.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
malignancy In reply to Walpurgis-Nocturnal [2003-11-15 07:56:42 +0000 UTC]
Thanks again...you're too kind...all of the time.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1