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malignancy — Leave Me Lonely
Published: 2004-06-05 12:56:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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If there was a section for boring poetry....this would be in it.This is about being left in a burger king back in Virginia for like half a day until my parents realized that they left me behind while on a family trip. I was like 9 or 10. My sister was asleep. That's why she didn't say anything.
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wow that must of been something else to have been left in a burger king for that long....i definatley didnt see that one coming.....the one thing I did not understand was the line about the painted face....
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Yeah, the painted face part really had nothing to do with it...I just liked how it sounded when I wrote it.haha And actually, I was kinda hopeing that my parents would leave me there forever, cause they gave me free food, and my uncle lived a few hours out, and I could've lived with him, cause he's fucking rich as shit and I would've been spoiled, but then I would've turned into a bitch like my cousins...so being depraved and neglected can be and is a good thing.
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its.... i dont know, is a childish poem 
it's not bad, i can picture the child in my mind saying that
i like it... it's weird
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I thinkyou have your writers comment and piece in the wrong boxes.
But the piece, I can hear that little girl. It really does seem like she's trying to reach out.
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Yeah....it's my little thing.....I love putting things in the wrong boxs, it makes it all the more fun fun fun. I'm glad you liked my childish poem. I was expecting everyone to make fun of it.lol
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