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malignancy — The Killer's Rush
Published: 2004-05-23 17:35:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 156; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description This is just a poem I wrote two nights ago...I was bored and was staring at this lamp, and it got me going.
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Comments: 18

Ezma [2004-06-01 16:54:35 +0000 UTC]

tear* another day dumpling

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malignancy In reply to Ezma [2004-06-01 16:56:56 +0000 UTC]

Indeedly doo

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Ezma [2004-05-29 15:45:28 +0000 UTC]

whaaaahoooooooo

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malignancy In reply to Ezma [2004-05-29 16:14:05 +0000 UTC]

lol, hey girl, how was last night? Sorry about all the miscommunication...Megan had my cell phone.lol

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Ezma In reply to malignancy [2004-06-01 16:29:34 +0000 UTC]

super doopper slushy pooper.....sorry u missed it dumplin. i got to meet DARA(he touched me) & AK1200 too. AND I WAS SO CLOSE TO THE STAGE THAT, MESSINIAN PRACTICLY GAVE ME A LAP DANCE.

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malignancy In reply to Ezma [2004-06-01 16:53:21 +0000 UTC]

rock on...Too bad I'm not chillin with ya right now...It got too cold over there, and I went home.lol

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rockisdeaddclxvi [2004-05-27 01:42:59 +0000 UTC]

quite dark and good...i like..
dw

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malignancy In reply to rockisdeaddclxvi [2004-05-27 02:41:48 +0000 UTC]

yay.

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panther420 [2004-05-24 01:27:21 +0000 UTC]

yes it was very intrigueing...you hooked the reader in no time at all....one thing the last three lines it didnt seem to fit well with me...heres something I thought of...just a suggestion of course
"The plan was carried out, from start to finish
But whose life will be the next one?
The next one to be diminished."
this seemed to give the end a little more kick...but in the end its completely up to you...good work though

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malignancy In reply to panther420 [2004-05-24 21:45:38 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that sounds cool too. It's neat that you would care enough to actually reword it. More power to ya, and thanx.

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panther420 In reply to malignancy [2004-05-24 23:55:19 +0000 UTC]

well dont you know...its always easier to make up new stuff for other peoples work than your own

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malignancy In reply to panther420 [2004-05-25 03:50:01 +0000 UTC]

that's not the case with me...I wish I could do that.

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cr0nix [2004-05-23 22:55:06 +0000 UTC]

nothing like a good hunt in the forest while stalking your next victim in the nude.... i love animalistic instinct.. he was nude right??? i would have been...

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malignancy In reply to cr0nix [2004-05-23 23:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Well, I thought more of the lines of cut off jeans and blood coating his body, but you can fantasize about him any way you wish.lol Neck id sounds grand.

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5thwheel [2004-05-23 18:43:29 +0000 UTC]

Holy Moly!!! Good one!!!! Me like

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malignancy In reply to 5thwheel [2004-05-23 20:16:21 +0000 UTC]

awesome.

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AngelY2Knight [2004-05-23 18:31:56 +0000 UTC]

fuck!! it's very good

it's an interesting style, and a deep poem, it reminds me a song of a friend, greta work

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malignancy In reply to AngelY2Knight [2004-05-23 20:17:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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