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malignancy — You Sweep Rose Petals
Published: 2003-11-24 05:46:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 45; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Hmmm, this poem was called "You Sweep Rose Petals While Dancing", but whatever...I hate how this place doesn't give you enough space for the titles.I just wrote this so there. I need to write about things more often, and not people...it's starting to frustrate me.
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nicely written, and yeh, we really need more space for titles. not all of us use 2 or 3 words, some of us have ones like "Francis farmer will have her revenge on seattle", or "Elderly woman behind the counter in a small town", both are great songs, and great poem,.. I really need to submit something new.
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Very true, and yes you do, and thanx.
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a beautiful piece...and i agree..the title space needs to be much longer...and include different symbols..can't use parenthesis..what kinda bullshit is that??? yes you should write more often...you write amazingly...
dw
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I agree with the symbols as well, I use all kinds in my titles, and the first time that that happened to me as well, I totally freaked out...i was like "WHAT KIND OF POETRY LAW DO THEY HAVE OVER US?!?" Anyway, perhaps I'll complain.lol maybe later though...people still get the full effect. It's the poem that counts, right?
And thank you so sooo much, that means the world to me. I love poetry and writing and all of that, but I often wonder if people truly read and appreciate it, you know? It's nice to write for yourself, but I love to share it as well. Thanx again.
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you're welcome..and yes, i agree..it's the poem that counts...if nothing else, i'll read what ya write...so you always at least have an audience of one...
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lol...I prefere small audiences anyway.
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