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Published: 2004-01-10 20:28:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 94; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description Alright so, here's the second part. I thought I had the third part finished, but when I read over it a minute ago, it didn't seem like it was finished at all. There's much improvement to be made. Anyway, feel free to tell me about this new set. I'm open to all whining, joy, and hate towards this...so yes, have at it. Expect more to come in the future. Again, brought to you by a subject from "Cronix". Check out his work. Very nice.
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Comments: 8

thanamosity [2004-01-12 17:22:40 +0000 UTC]

i love your imagary as always
i cant spell as we both know

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malignancy In reply to thanamosity [2004-01-12 23:39:46 +0000 UTC]

yay! that's a fun word. I have an awesome one coming up tonight...I just don't have time to put it on here at the moment. How odd.

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Walpurgis-Nocturnal [2004-01-11 09:46:25 +0000 UTC]

I'm tired of drinking from styro-foam cups.
They seem to mock you with every sip.
I'd say so.
You'de already know though.

I like those lines.. dunno what it is about them. I think it's the bitter humor, or at least, I interpreted it as a sort of bitter humor. I like it though.. the whole thing kinda seems to jump around a bit, feels like there is an underlying something that I'm not getting though... *confused look* oh well, nicely written though, I might have to read it again to see if I missed something.

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malignancy In reply to Walpurgis-Nocturnal [2004-01-11 21:23:38 +0000 UTC]

That part that you liked....well, you know how they're made to have you drink hot things from them? And well...they feel cold right, but then you take a sip and you burn your fucking tongue. That's how it is. It mocks you. Those damn things are a conspiracy!

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azrael0033 [2004-01-11 05:00:52 +0000 UTC]

I visualize this as if everything were sacred and teeming with a universal energy. Here I go getting all NEW AGE on your ass, but not really. Have you ever worn those glasses that refract light and everything glows with colours and such? It's like no one wants to see it without the glasses.

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malignancy In reply to azrael0033 [2004-01-11 21:28:56 +0000 UTC]

It all makes perfect sense.

It's like syzygy. j/k

That's the way I wish people would see...maybe even through glasses made of fractals. Yeah, but those things are neat. I remember those.

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rockisdeaddclxvi [2004-01-11 04:56:33 +0000 UTC]

i like the metaphors here...can't wait to read the third..
dw

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malignancy In reply to rockisdeaddclxvi [2004-01-11 21:30:07 +0000 UTC]

excitement!

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