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Published: 2004-01-15 17:35:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 124; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Feelings come to surface too quickly. They form an uneasy structure. The building is called chaos; and it runs on the anxious wisdom of child-like test patterns. We either attempt to never hit that building, but most likely, we always end up in that place one time or another. It's one busy place.This particular poem is about the chaotic structure in a bad relationship. Chaos in the mind, as we try to find what love is, Chaos when we bind ourselves into that relationship, chaos in fighting, chaos in the uneasy silence, then chaos in the noise and violence, which brings us to the beginning of chaos mocking us, saying that it's it's purest form. Hmmm....I like it. Anyway, tell me what you guys think.
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azrael0033 [2004-01-16 06:08:36 +0000 UTC]
Such a simple and effective explination to put my problems into perspective. You make looking at the BIG picture seem so easy...
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malignancy In reply to azrael0033 [2004-01-16 07:11:39 +0000 UTC]
Thanx....sometimes I don't always see that though....I write these things to remind myself.
"by the way, it's a fav...(that means favorite)"
OMG>LOL!!!!
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azrael0033 In reply to azrael0033 [2004-01-16 06:10:38 +0000 UTC]
by the way, it's a fav...(that means favorite)
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Ezma [2004-01-15 20:12:00 +0000 UTC]
i don't know what to say.........i know i like it..........hmmmm, i think i'll say tourjete'.
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malignancy In reply to Ezma [2004-01-15 20:19:27 +0000 UTC]
oo, neat...what's that mean, all I know is that you rhymed. haha. wee!
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Ezma In reply to malignancy [2004-01-15 20:28:27 +0000 UTC]
ekhum....now listen up students, a " tourjete' " is a ballet step used very often in gymnastics. the step is simply a switchkicking hop with a 1/2 twist landing on the oppisite leg. if you have any questions report to the office o' pain and you will recieve a swift spanking for not paying attention and a lollypop to keep you silent. DISMISSED
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malignancy In reply to Ezma [2004-01-15 20:37:16 +0000 UTC]
O my. what fun. spankings are the best of the best. that's cool though, I learn somethign new everyday.
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evcfenix [2004-01-15 17:46:09 +0000 UTC]
u've done it so well and in an exciting rush when others have made such idea seem mundane. or maybe its just my mood. i dont noe. anyways
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