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Published: 2014-05-30 20:23:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1049; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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One of Dee-oh-ghee's puppies.fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/201β¦
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This is really good, I like the shading, but no offense you source of failed a little on the shading, I like the dog's pose, it's cute. I think you could have made a better tail, the paws are really realistic, I like the dog's expression, it's texture is very good, the mouth looks quite realistic, I like what you did that airbrush tool, it looks nice. And when you look at fur, you think it's fluffy, that's a really good effect, you made there. Well nice work, I hope you get better at drawing, good luck.
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If you're going to say something's bad, say what they could do better.
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"but no offense you source of failed a little on the shading,"
"I think you could have made a better tail"
If you don't know how to tell them to improve on that, or even specifying exactly what is wrong, it's usually a good idea to add that you don't know why or that you don't know how it could be done better.
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Kay, kay, gosh don't need to give me a big speech about it..I've enough problems already, if you're criticizing me just because of this critique, then fine I'll just delete it, gosh..
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Whoah, don't get defensive there, I'm just trying to help you make better critiques in the future..
If I've offended you, my sincerest apologies.
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I wasn't being defensive..why do people keep telling me that? =.= Well, perhaps I won't make any critiques in the future, since they all SUCK SO BAD, what's the point of making something, if you got it all wrong...You didn't offend me....I'm just.....a little moody..I guess.....
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Well. Deep breaths, man, you just need to do that.
And yes, you were being defensive, realise that and try to learn to be able to take criticism, it will help you.
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Yeah, breath when there is no air, my throat is fucked up irl, I mean it, idk wtf happened but I can't swallow or take deep breaths. AND I wasn't being defensive...god damn it...and I can't criticize when my draws suck ass, who am I to tell people if their work is good or bad, I'm piece of shit compared to them, a poor guy can't tell a rich guy that he's bad or criticize him even if it's good.
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I'm really sorry to hear about your throat, now- I'll add the fact that that's entirely wrong. Anyone can get criticism from anyone, and the criticised would be stupid not to at least take into account said criticism.
There's always room for improvement for anyone.
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Heh my throat will get better, yeah you source of have a point.
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Thanks.
Good luck with the throat- remember to drink loads o' water.
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Np, thanks, I'll drink water, even tho I don't like it, but I'm sure it'll help ^u^
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Phantom of the opera? Because of his mark covers half of his face like a mask?
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Yes! And the spot is on the same side as the Phantom's from PotO, but reverse!
How did you know?
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It reminded me of him
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XD so what did you want?
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Chibi her pleaseΒ hi-tuvy.deviantart.com/art/Tuvβ¦
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I know! I do too!
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