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Published: 2012-10-20 03:58:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 585; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 3
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Pen and digital mediaPossible business card design...not sure yet...
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Well... your work is awesome. This piece is pretty awesome, but is it your best piece? Is it the most thought out and the most polished? Maybe... that's for you to decide... but did you look at this one alongside all the others to make sure one of the others doesn't have a little more sparkle?
I think this piece should either be more sloppy (painterly) or cleaner. For example the wallpaper design above the head looks stained... the linework in some places a little wonky... like not sketchy wonky, but oops wonky. A second attempt at this knowing you will use it for repro purposes might be in order to get the best representation of your work.
I watch your work closely, and admire it very much. I don't believe this one represents the best of what you are.
( I just had a SCAD critique flashback! )
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Alright thanks, I appreciate the feedback.
The the stained effect however was done on purpose
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Whoa. That would certainly be an eye-catching business card! Or a cool shirt. Or a beautiful painting. Great work. =]
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Thank you very much
now I feel all warm and fuzzy inside
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oooohhhhhh :] that would be a badass business card.
-xo.
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How very interesting. That would make a very unique business card...
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