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Published: 2012-01-19 21:34:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 21453; Favourites: 242; Downloads: 104
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First new page of 2012 finally
Next page gonna be pretty nasty XD *so looking forward to draw that one e..e*
EDIT: removed some sound effects
Enjoy 8D
Art/characters and story by me
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Comments: 79
Great page! The feelings of this horse are very nicely done! 
nothing much to say... 
GJ!!!
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holy - *explodes* you are epic, you kno that??
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Wow, amazing comic. You join animated and realism style very well! I can't wait for more pages! God job
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Thank you very much!
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x.x I barely looked at this o.o It's really interesting! ^^ But i wouldn't know if i liked the whole story or not, depending on how it goes. Also, I love your art ^^
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I can't wait for the next page! This is so intense
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I love that red/green effect. Truly awesome!
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hmm very interesting
I think he sees dead horses.. ?
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*O* i love how your comic has this morbid feeling to it~ really great!
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I totally feel like digging out a pair of old 3D-glasses to check if the third panel looks three dimentional xD
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Haha somehow i don't think it works (wasn't even intentional XDD) but some said it did pop out a bit O.o
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It did have an interesting effect XD Details like Engel's eye seemed rather flat while the green and red lines were almost iluminating. xD
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OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD...
Can't wait for the next page.
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8D thanks im workin on it XD
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can't wait, can't wait
damn, it looks great ^^ and I just need to see the next page
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okay, so i got curious and looked at the last pannel with 3D glasses. youll never guess what happened O.O
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Let me guess...nothing? XDDD haha wasn't an intension to go for 3D effect on the last one just a shock effectXD
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well it went 3D a little! scared me a bit. it popped out but you couldnt really tell what it was.
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well, it was all fine and dandy until- ZOMUNICORNS THERES A HORSE HEAD FLOATING IN MY ROOM! O.o ... oh wait.
the picture popped out at me a little. it looked crazy.
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OK. So the comic is really confusing at times, like what to read next, who's who, and what's going on. But!
I do love the amount of work that is clearly put into these pages. It makes looking at them each worth while.
All the detail on the muscles, the eyes, and the lighting is incredible, it truly is. Keep up the good work!
(( Adding a back story kinda thing or a list of what order to read the speaking pieces would be nice.
I say this because I see rather poorly and it's hard to tell where to go next and what's going on. ))
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alright i will keep it in mind :3 as for the story itself it kinda is meant to be confusing at this point but hopefully it will all fall into place as the story progresses
Thanks for the feedback
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Thanks for listening!
I kinda figured it was supposed to be a little confusing,
but yeah, hopefully it clears up after a while.
You're very welcome for the feedback.
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Engel is looking into the past? Maybe something traumatized Dex's mother way back when.
I love the eyes and the crazy effects going on in the first panel!
Awesome job again 
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Haha your getting quite close actually :3 ah and gore there will be...enough haha
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I can't wait for the next one!
I'm ready for it!!!!
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hope to have 2 more done this month :3
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Ouuu the anticipation...I'm excited to see where this goes.
Also, I commend you for making a comic with horses using such realism
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I really really like the pictures in this one so nothing really to say about them but they are beautiful. <3
The only thing that bothers me, the "sound effects" text. Zooomm doesn't really explain to me what your trying to show. I think of Zooming fast yes but it seems to me like "zoom" would be used if you could see the figure moving. Thus even zoom doesn't work unless you wanna add some ghost figure/wispy/cloud thing but I like that they aren't there so... solution to me would replacing Zoooomm with Wooosh. If you have some other ideas say so.
The other one Shock! Oh man um, this one is pretty simple. I think it just needs to be gone in general. We can see that he is shocked there for don't need to be reformed of your drawing. Its like a dramatic pose staring at you saying "I'm dramatically staring at you". Derp.
Great page minus a few simple fixes! YAY new page
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Thanks you was right about the sound effects, the page looks better without them, thanks for the feedback
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