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MangledMisfit — Drown
Published: 2005-04-03 19:20:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1232; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 9
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DrownCareless Thought
Taking the plunge
Make my mind go blank
Let the liquid fill my lungs
Beneath the surface
Flowing down with silent grace
Frozen kissed blue lips
On my emotionless face
Rise, rise above
From my mouth the air bubbles depart
Life comes to a sudden haul
At the final beat of my expired heart
Look high above where I had stood
Fade, darkness kills light
Close my eyes
The skin I wear is now white
Lost to the dark depths of the waters
Where I will be lost, never to be found
Given to my prefect blue
As I had slowly drowned
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Comments: 14
no...*sniff*..problem....friend....
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very expressive and thought-provoking piece, great imagery! thankyou for submitting this!
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Wow. That was absolutely amazing; it made me shiver and gasp just reading it!
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^__^;; Thanks.
>.> Which reminds me I haven't added any new poems or anything on DA in a while... maybe I should. X_X
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*gasps for air* O_O
Hehehe. Loves it. I can picture it all in my mind as I read along. Splendid.
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hehehee... thanks. ^-^ I loved writing it.
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Thank you very much. Haven't see you in long time. Happy to see ya.
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You're welcome. Happy to see ya too.
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