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Published: 2009-03-21 03:55:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 2305; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 42
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Crow: And behold the page that eliminates all doubt - even when I can't script a buttshot into it anywhere - that Miss Pixie could possibly ever fail to hit you with the hot. Jumpin' jugs of Juno! I'm lovin' this new colouring style of hers, too. Also, Delilah cheats by having cable. D'oh!
Pix: Trying a new, more '
roffessional' shading style, that will pop a bit more when printed. I'd value some feedbackDamn, it's fun drawing Delilah when she gets sassy.
Written by =TheCrowchan
Art by =manic-pixie
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Geeez I dunno what critique can I say because it's great and I dig the new coloring style! Sooo warm X)
...okay, I'll nitpick a bit then. Try to change font size as rarely as possible (except when on purpose, like for sound effects). Unless he's really thinking in a different pace there. But like I said, it's nitpicking.
And poor Niko!
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He is supposed to be thinking in a different pace, there - don't feel sorry for him, he does it to himself XD
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That's my fault, actually! I wanted to show that there was the surface-level thinking, and then the nagging-little-doubts thoughts, and couldn't think of a better way to do it. D'oh! x_x
I'm just lucky that Miss Pixie makes it all look amazing, anyway, and lousy writing or placement gets covered up with awesome. XD
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But then it comes under the sound effects! NITPICK MISSION FAILED. Maybe there is a point trying to make it even smaller then, but I'm not sure if it will stay readable.
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Ohhh, this is much more colourful. Changes the whole mood of the thing, and that's fine- l think the colouring works really well for you. lf there's anything l'd critique in this, it's how you're dovng the smoke from the cigarette. Stylizing is one thing, bu the shape of it is really awkward, it looks more like torn paper than like something that flows.
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yeah, i do have to work on the smoke - it's a tricky bugger.
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Love how Niko looks in the second last panel <3
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You're welcome.
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These pants were nearly new, too.
Gods damn it.
But no sexamitous lip is left unpouted, no manly chin left un-jutted, in this fabulous trip to the Dimension of Hotness.
Also, Niko struts like a pro. Hoo!
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She's totally checking out his ass, the WHOLE time.
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The shading. The poses.
I should see if I have any ritual voodoo paint left. This deserves worship.
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the writing is the clever bits - i blame the quality of these pages for hanging around crow while i drew them.
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Huh. Okay, help me chop this chicken's head off. I don't have HARDLY enough paint.
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... Oh my goodness, such a HUGE leap in colouring. Simply gorgeous.
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OH DELILAH. so very hot. SOHOT. Oh my god I love her mouth in that second panel. I WISH I HAD A WEENER SO I COULD MAKE INAPPROPRIATE COMMENTS CONCERNING THOSE LIPS oh wait I probably still can OH WELL. That coral looks really pretty on her too. HI why don't I comment on your stuff more?
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Lip comments, especially inappropriate ones, are always welcome here.
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You're getting way better with making women actually look like women, Emily, I applaud you. With that said, as I said when you showed me forever ago, this looks awesome, and it looks even better with colours. Your use of warm colour in this comic works really well. :U
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The curves. It's all in the curves.
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Fff man I really really love how you do her hair. Also you're getting a lot better at sexy girl faces!
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Sexy girl faces are lots of fun. Pouty lips? Yesplz.
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