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Manic-Rabbit — Red
Published: 2010-02-18 14:24:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description There is still that same command, a
demanding dominance trapping me whatever way you wish.
Until I'm pinned under you like a startled rabbit
eyes pleading,
enticing myself too fight you off
knowing as soon as your fingers reach that place
I will be unable to do anything but submit.

My eyes bleed with the cogency of sensation
my blood rushing to you.

It is magnetic;
you are the pole.

I am unable to pull my essence away.
It is my fundamental nature to love you.
Even on the brutal days when I'm without you
the despondency,
making me curse you.
There is still the overpowering devotion.

You swallow me whole like the monster you are
I am consumed with you,
devoted to the point of frenzied obsession.

There has always been the taste of you in my mouth,
the memory of
chapped lips pressed tight against my own,
tongue so far down my throat,
I'm choking.
I'm still in love with those pungent kisses.

You cut me to the bone max
Our love isn't red
It's black and forever demanding of my core.
I will die willingly of exhaustion because of you.
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Comments: 5

veinsrunempty [2010-02-19 06:17:24 +0000 UTC]

I can't tell what the emotional content of this poem is...

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Manic-Rabbit In reply to veinsrunempty [2010-02-20 00:00:19 +0000 UTC]

have a guess?

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veinsrunempty In reply to Manic-Rabbit [2010-02-20 00:09:29 +0000 UTC]

A bit of anger on the surface. Regret and sadness underneath.

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Manic-Rabbit In reply to veinsrunempty [2010-02-20 00:40:37 +0000 UTC]

im angry at him
i regret some of the things that have happened in the past and yet i don't because they got us where we are today,

i am competly in love with him and yet i hate him more than i have hated anyone prob because i am totally unable to do anything but submit to him.

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veinsrunempty In reply to Manic-Rabbit [2010-03-19 03:13:45 +0000 UTC]

relationships are really fucking hard.

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