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Published: 2005-11-30 09:11:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 226; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 23
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Description I feel her fingers around my neck
Clamping down
My panting breath

She licks my cheek as I gasp
Observes my eyes
Glazed with death

Her methods bring release to me
As in her grasp I bow
Wielding torture with her hands

I know she loves me now
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Comments: 32

Jungle-Jew [2006-07-25 20:28:56 +0000 UTC]

Niiiiiiiiiiice.

I very much like your writing.

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to Jungle-Jew [2006-07-25 23:48:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you It is my own personal therapy...

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corpsefire [2006-04-27 16:16:24 +0000 UTC]

Violent,expressif & absolutely wonderful !

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to corpsefire [2006-04-27 16:38:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much and for the

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corpsefire In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2006-04-28 07:42:30 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure hun you just keep them whips flyin' *grins*

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stitchmymouth [2006-03-27 18:43:34 +0000 UTC]

O_O Wow.

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c4rson [2006-02-06 14:16:41 +0000 UTC]

Your descriptions are fantastic...

I love your ideas...

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to c4rson [2006-02-06 21:32:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you...more to come fairly soon I am certain.

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c4rson In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2006-02-07 13:03:38 +0000 UTC]

I can wait... lol...

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psycopath64 [2006-01-04 22:12:22 +0000 UTC]

BEAUTIFUL! i have no other words.......

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to psycopath64 [2006-01-05 13:33:57 +0000 UTC]

Shall I ask Nurse Rox to take a look at your voice box? (Thank you, btw)

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psycopath64 In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2006-01-05 21:30:50 +0000 UTC]

lol, yeah...

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Truley-Unruly [2006-01-04 15:49:03 +0000 UTC]

Excellent!

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to Truley-Unruly [2006-01-05 13:33:01 +0000 UTC]

Thrilled you like it.

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Truley-Unruly In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2006-01-05 15:33:36 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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Deathpen [2006-01-04 08:23:19 +0000 UTC]

Very good work - i like it ! take a look at this [link] its an ilustrated poem you have to zoom in to be able to read the poem

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to Deathpen [2006-01-05 13:31:12 +0000 UTC]

Gracious...I did check out your link. Very nice poem and I love how you illustrate behind it. I would like to do that eventually, with my work.

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KariAnnLax [2005-12-06 23:01:42 +0000 UTC]

One of my favorite hobbies. Nice to see someone writing about it

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to KariAnnLax [2005-12-09 16:59:35 +0000 UTC]

Hobby yourself over to my place NOW then!

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KariAnnLax In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2005-12-09 17:03:13 +0000 UTC]

**wicked grin

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to KariAnnLax [2005-12-09 17:04:07 +0000 UTC]

I think my black rose just perked up a bit.

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thedaemonspawn [2005-12-05 01:49:07 +0000 UTC]

Torturous, and sexy. Good things so do come in small packages.

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to thedaemonspawn [2005-12-05 02:30:04 +0000 UTC]

They also come in big ones too...nothing like cupping an item that is larger than your hands, only to devour it with your mouth.

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thedaemonspawn In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2005-12-06 02:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Ooooooooo!

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Metatetron [2005-12-03 16:38:10 +0000 UTC]

uhm...this is plain sexy...in a very very twisted way...and I like it.


thank you - *Metatetron

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to Metatetron [2005-12-04 15:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Twisted yes, around my neck in writhing pleasure. Glad to find another that liked this.

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Metatetron In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2005-12-04 16:50:25 +0000 UTC]

I presumed it was you narrating it, and other than the same gender mix (which unfortunately leaves me out of the contest) this is the subject of many a fantasy...thank you ... I hope you post something soon... *Metatetron

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DeepBlackDiamond [2005-11-30 22:33:20 +0000 UTC]

delicious.

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xybre [2005-11-30 10:03:21 +0000 UTC]

You know, that's the first rhyming poem with such a flow and rythm to it that also was dark and had meaning to it.
I've read poetry that flowed as nicely by the late great :devth-Hyrax-Lord: (possibly ressurected), but his, although with meaning were always dark-humoured parodies of his own life. This.. this is just dark. It's beautiful, great work.

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xybre In reply to xybre [2005-12-01 13:00:02 +0000 UTC]

Oops ~the-hyrax-lord

Mmm, hour from me, it's now 6:58, checking my messages two hours later and I haven't slept since it was daylight.

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to xybre [2005-11-30 10:15:06 +0000 UTC]

Sitting here at 5:15 a.m., typing with chipped polished nails...your comment brings a grin to my sleepless mind.

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xybre In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2005-12-01 13:02:17 +0000 UTC]

Further proof I've been up a long time, I started talking to myself. -_- Accidentally replied to my comment and not yours.

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