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Published: 2006-04-17 12:54:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 223; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description Sustenance
~Manic D

Alone I sit
In musty room
Fog to breathe
Black of doom

Reaching out
I touch the dark
Thick like oil
Naked stark

Shiny trap
Glimmers bright
Like a cat
Crouch then flight

Noise-like snap
Arm feels pain
Nibbling cheese
Mice starve again
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Comments: 25

Truley-Unruly [2006-05-10 04:54:08 +0000 UTC]

Vivid and provocative...very nice!

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to Truley-Unruly [2006-05-10 11:47:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you and for the too!!!

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Truley-Unruly In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2006-05-12 08:18:37 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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DistortedSmile [2006-04-20 17:03:54 +0000 UTC]

The word formation is fantastic, meow

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to DistortedSmile [2006-04-20 17:07:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you delicious!

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DistortedSmile In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2006-04-20 17:09:23 +0000 UTC]

Smooches

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KariAnnLax [2006-04-20 02:00:22 +0000 UTC]

I've read this before right... or am I dejavu ing..... ???

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to KariAnnLax [2006-04-20 12:05:46 +0000 UTC]

Yes, this is the piece I had posted at the forum.

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LawrenceDeDark [2006-04-18 01:52:15 +0000 UTC]

Very nice ... makes me for some reason.


Sometimes words don't translate so well to images. Like books to movies.



In our minds, I'm sure we all see this piece differently.

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to LawrenceDeDark [2006-04-18 15:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Everything I write does that!

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plumpener [2006-04-18 01:27:35 +0000 UTC]

Very thought provoking!

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SoulCatcher78 [2006-04-17 13:47:36 +0000 UTC]

First part would be easy enough to do, as far as the second...that'll take more thought.

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to SoulCatcher78 [2006-04-17 14:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Love to get those gears turning...

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SoulCatcher78 In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2006-04-17 23:22:30 +0000 UTC]

You can probably smell the smoke from way over there, lol.

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to SoulCatcher78 [2006-04-17 23:52:50 +0000 UTC]

*sniff sniff* Yep, smells a little musty...you been hanging out with Grim again?

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SoulCatcher78 In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2006-04-17 23:55:11 +0000 UTC]

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ShuHan [2006-04-17 13:08:59 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. Very nice visuals it creates. I have an image created already that might fit it lol. Just umm meeh.. nevermind. I'll note you with a link to it.

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to ShuHan [2006-04-17 13:28:52 +0000 UTC]

Cool!!!

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ShuHan In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2006-04-17 23:01:43 +0000 UTC]

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to ShuHan [2006-04-17 23:53:39 +0000 UTC]

What are you laughing at? You have to admit those little pieces of cheese in my room ARE pretty tasty! LOL I don't chince out on my cheese!

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ShuHan In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2006-04-18 00:20:09 +0000 UTC]

Cheese.. it's what's for dinner lol.

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to ShuHan [2006-04-18 00:41:16 +0000 UTC]

If we're lucky! LOL

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ShuHan In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2006-04-18 11:45:47 +0000 UTC]

It's what I had for lunch yesterday. Some cheese, meat and crackers along with a nice glass of merlot. ^_^ Then I went for my walk.

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ManicallyDelicious In reply to ShuHan [2006-04-18 15:26:20 +0000 UTC]

That sounds lovely, all of it...you should have just packed a picnic basket lunch!

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ShuHan In reply to ManicallyDelicious [2006-04-18 16:46:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah but the lawn is all soggy still So i just sat in the living room eating and reading my book

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