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MannOfTheHour — Purification in Progress... (The Batter TF/MC) [NSFW]
Published: 2016-02-01 02:43:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 2972; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Description Two men drag a man in a business suit into an empty white room. The room only has a baseball bat in it. The two men drop the man in the business suit on the room's floor. The two men then leave the room and seal the room air-tight.

2 Hours Later...

The man in the business suit wakes up. He notices the bat and walks over to it. He picks it up, only for the bat to vanish in his hand. He then feels a pain in his right shoulder and keels over in pain. He then bursts into flame and runs around the room, screaming in pain. He soon keels over, apparently dead. All that is left is a charred corpse. The corpse is then covered in a fleshy material that hardens over the course of five minutes. The casing then cracks open, and a figure emerges from the casing. The figure is covered in a web-like material, and it slowly rises out of what's left of the corpse. The figure then tears the webbing open, revealing what was inside the webbing. A strange, alien-like figure steps out of the empty shell and notices a lever on the wall. The figure then pulls the lever, switching off some of the lights in the observation room. The figure then slowly turns its head to the observation window.


"Let's purge these impure beasts."

[Camera feed abruptly ends]


SUBJECT 9344 SUMMARY:

Species: Unidentified (Claimed to be human), Male

Subject of transformation: A normal person who went to church every day.

Result: Success, original subject lost, full control achieved

Time: 3 minutes

Notes: Pain reaction observed shortly into the transformation.
Subject burst into flame and was encased in a hard material, like an insect's carapace.
Transformed subject had crocodile-like head and an enlarged hand.
Transformed subject wore the attire of a baseball player.
Transformation did not convert organic material.
Tried to break reinforced observation window for five minutes before giving up on breaking it.

Intern's note: That thing almost broke the damn window! It had 1% integrity left when it was done with it! I knew I should've been a telemarketer!
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Comments: 4

CrackTFs [2018-04-17 18:17:34 +0000 UTC]

The whole approach you took to this is very unique! I like the whole “mysterious science experiment” plot you have going on. Do you plan on dwelving deeper into the story of this organization and why there doing these experiments, or is this a one time thing?

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SeekerDestroy [2016-02-01 04:53:50 +0000 UTC]

amazing....can't wait to see more

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CrazyNaut [2016-02-01 02:54:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow… I've called identity death stories dark before, but I've never seen one with actual death!

It fits perfectly with the tone! Good job there!

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MannOfTheHour In reply to CrazyNaut [2016-02-01 03:38:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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