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Published: 2007-05-27 12:12:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 60; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Alone,
Standing at a crossroads,
Giving in beneath the flames,
Sinking in beneath the weight,
Desperate cries for something more,
A hungry river calling one forth,
To the depths, burry your soul,
This dark world has nothing to hold,
Depression lies, shifting your gaze,
From rough times to ending days,
There's nothing more that one can do,
But to live, willing another way,
Hoping one distant day,
The sun will shine on you, alone.
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Comments: 4

Marbly-mars [2007-05-28 13:12:00 +0000 UTC]

It's good. You could really feel that you meant it.

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maplekokob In reply to Marbly-mars [2007-05-28 15:55:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...that's sweet.

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ashabbie [2007-05-27 17:24:02 +0000 UTC]

Well, i like it...Its really Nice and has a calm feeling to it like your other poems...^.^

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maplekokob In reply to ashabbie [2007-05-28 01:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...it's good to hear what I'm getting right.

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