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Published: 2007-02-25 01:42:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 78; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description When we embrace,
I love feeling your whiskers,
Tickle my cheek,
Always assuring me,
There’s joy and warmth in life.

When you hold me,
I love feeling your chest rise,
And softly fall,
Always assuring me,
This isn’t merely a sweet dream.

When we grasp hands,
I love the feeling of your palm,
Tightly gripping mine,
Always assuring me,
We are ever so much more than friends.

When we kiss,
I love feeling your gentle hand,
Caressing my face,
Always assuring me,
There’s more to us than passion.

There’s joy and warmth,
There’s sweet reality,
There’s united souls,
Yet mostly, there’s love.
Ever hoping, never failing,
Undying, uninhibited,
Tender, faithful love.
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Comments: 9

cthornton567 [2007-02-28 05:16:13 +0000 UTC]

you know what, youve really got this whole love poetry thing down. its a real accomplishment, good job.

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maplekokob In reply to cthornton567 [2007-02-28 20:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Ha. Thanks. What can I say. I try. Both love, poetry, and a mix.

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cthornton567 In reply to maplekokob [2007-03-01 03:16:55 +0000 UTC]

hahahahaha

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HideTheDecay [2007-02-25 02:21:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, normally I'm not one for unrhymed poetry but that is amazing. Really. I even felt slightly, oh cozy and safe reading that. You give off emotion really well.

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maplekokob In reply to HideTheDecay [2007-02-25 02:31:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. That's what I go for. If someone I can use my words to reach into someones soul at some point in my life...I have lived and used my talents well.

As for "unrhymed poetry"...Here's one of my biggest writing tips/personal philosophy.

Never sacrifice the integrity of a piece for the thrill of a rhyme.

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HideTheDecay In reply to maplekokob [2007-02-27 03:05:46 +0000 UTC]

You know, I've noticed that from time to time with what I write...I have to change how I want the poem to go in order to rhyme...then again..at times the rhymes come out perfectly.

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maplekokob In reply to HideTheDecay [2007-02-27 03:42:17 +0000 UTC]

Yea. But at times they don't...or I just don't care. I don't focus on rhyme...it isn't vital to me.

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maplekokob In reply to maplekokob [2007-02-27 17:02:25 +0000 UTC]

It's fun *nudges*

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HideTheDecay In reply to maplekokob [2007-02-27 12:12:12 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...maybe I should try to write like that sometime

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