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Published: 2007-03-01 02:16:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 124; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Description When I drift away,
Beneath the shifting lights,
Laying perfectly at ease,
The sun shining bright…
I think a lovely thought,
Of all that lies ahead,
Off into futurity
My feathered wings I spread…

One day, someday,
I hope to land,
On the shores of my dreams,
One day, someday,
I wish to see,
Every day that is meant to be.

There is so much below,
That could one day be much more,
So much of life and love,
Ever higher I do soar…
Into each wisp I dive,
In and out of every cloud,
Yearning I will find,
A future in each bound…

One day, someday,
Most of all,
I hope to save away,
A simple moment,
Just to see,
All that is right now…

All my captured dreams.
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Comments: 12

RJWhisper [2007-03-06 02:23:22 +0000 UTC]

i admire you because i can't use rhyming anymore, at least intentionally although sometimes i'll go back through my work and find it there...which annoys me! but it's all good in the end. i wrote nothing but rhyming poetry from 3rd to 6th grade, and i got pretty sick of myself...so i can't write rhyming poetry anymore and be serious...but i'm glad you can. you do it well!

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maplekokob In reply to RJWhisper [2007-03-06 21:57:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.
I'm actually like you were I don't usually try to, but if I realize I have it in some I go through and try to complete it.

My philosophy, which I tell everyone, is...never sacrifice the integrity of a piece for the thrill of a rhyme. Displaying a valid point, soul, and emotion is the utmost priority...all the rest is simply unnecessary decoration.

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cryingpain [2007-03-05 08:55:20 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful poem does fit the image well. =]

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maplekokob In reply to cryingpain [2007-03-05 22:58:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you...

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kitten2554 [2007-03-01 22:54:55 +0000 UTC]

Wow, Again thats another of your beautiful poems. Hope you win ^^

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maplekokob In reply to kitten2554 [2007-03-01 23:39:16 +0000 UTC]

Ha...I didn't do it for the win. More so just so I can get myself out their more and so I could gain confidence, ya know?

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kitten2554 In reply to maplekokob [2007-03-03 00:16:23 +0000 UTC]

Ya, I know, but still it would be extra if you won. So I guess you win both ways ^-^

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KLHart-Creations [2007-03-01 22:43:23 +0000 UTC]

wow!! i hope u wint the contest!!
really pretty and awsome pic tio go with it

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maplekokob In reply to KLHart-Creations [2007-03-01 23:40:21 +0000 UTC]

The pic made my day. I have a knack for finding the perfect shots. I more so did this for self confidence...to verify my opinion of my work. And to prove to a small portion of this world that just because I may be a southern hick with grammar, I will make it on this Earth with or without all the laws of language well underhand.

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Paragua [2007-03-01 11:31:48 +0000 UTC]

this is fantastic!I'll favourite it! I hope you'll win thecompetition..

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maplekokob In reply to Paragua [2007-03-01 23:42:03 +0000 UTC]

Ha...thanks. Of course you would haha. You're a sweetheart.

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Paragua In reply to maplekokob [2007-03-02 17:05:44 +0000 UTC]

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