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maplekokob — Echo Unto the Mountains
Published: 2007-09-05 19:05:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Just close your eyes to peaceful dreams,And open them now to this reality,
Far better than anything minds create,
Yet far less than our own glorious state,
There lies the mountains, in your heart,
See them now, see them part,
They call, they beckon for you to be,
Always, only, and forever free,
Free to roam, and free to love,
Free to live in warmth high above,
So go there now, don't hesitate,
This life is yours, fling open the gates,
Live to love and love to live,
And all your fears away will give,
Live and let live, as they say,
No matter the shortness of our days,
The blue smoky ridges echo your name,
Will you answer, or will you delay?
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Comments: 9
Aww, thanks, that's so sweet.
*reads piece to remember what is is*
Yea...I liked this one too...some of the rhyme schemes were a little off...but it means a lot to me all the same!
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it's more about how it makes you feel than the ryhming of it it has good rythum...
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A true wolf needs to roam
where sky meets no ocean alone
where fog clouds the topmost tree
and peace emanates from thee
in deepened silence I will find
fire of red to the eve divine
encircling, entwining in pure silk notes
to embrace love and keep alone
and share only light and emotions true
like the ever present spirit
of a very beautiful wolf.
GORGEOUS pick by tha way.
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Thanks.
Did you write that? I love it!
^_^
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You are very welcomed.
And yes i did write that just this last minute actually for you >_<
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Aw, you are an angel!
That is so awesome. I'm going to save it somewhere on my computer so I can read it often when I'm blue!
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