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maplekokob — Eighteen Candles
Published: 2007-11-12 21:50:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Eighteen candles blown away,
Lost to the breeze of a wish,
Eighteen thoughts pass me by,
Before darkness steals a kiss.

Eighteen years feign deep sleep,
Though in my heart each one I keep,
Eighteen trials now undone,
Kept nearby for anon.

Eighteen tears for eighteen years,
Eighteen times a choice to live,
Eighteen loves a frightened child,
Beckoning them a past to give.

Eighteen takes away the day,
The simple one is wont to play,
Eighteen calls this life unfair,
With adult cares and weary shares.

Eighteen takes its toll on me,
The child that's lost in her sleep,
Suddenly I turned eighteen,
Aging a year within a dream.
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Comments: 8

rebelx [2008-02-12 14:30:12 +0000 UTC]

Aww what amazing memories.

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maplekokob In reply to rebelx [2008-02-13 01:35:02 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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Tora-Jakuten [2007-11-15 13:29:23 +0000 UTC]

Happy birthday!

Sorry it's a little late, but I haven't been online. 34 un-looked-at deviations and some forty unread journals can attest to that.

Congratulations on taking one more step on your journey...

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maplekokob In reply to Tora-Jakuten [2007-11-15 17:55:52 +0000 UTC]

^_^

Thanks! I'm pretty siked about it.

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CyllanPennor [2007-11-15 01:10:01 +0000 UTC]

CONGRAAAAAAATS I?M MAKGIN YOU A GIFT
Just give me time

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maplekokob In reply to CyllanPennor [2007-11-15 02:40:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh really! How exciting!

Remind me when you do. I always forget to check my deviation updates. I'm pathetic like that!

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capable-ofchange [2007-11-13 00:59:02 +0000 UTC]

happy belated birthday! 18's a great age!

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maplekokob In reply to capable-ofchange [2007-11-13 02:13:08 +0000 UTC]

Aw thanks! I sure hope so!

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