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White baby rose petals,Trace the silken floors,
Decorating the path,
That flows into eternity…
Pursue the emblems,
And all the truth they hold,
Follow their elegant lead,
Deep into your ever after…
Gain way to paradise,
Let a tear bless your feet,
Breath in passion’s essence,
Your perfect hope is near…
Gaze into twinkling pools,
Read your tale of love,
Take in the final moment,
Utter your tender “I do…”
Cheers to your fairytale,
Welcome to your one desire,
Cheers to your sweetest dreams,
Welcome to your life of love.
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Comments: 19
kitten2554 [2007-03-13 22:53:09 +0000 UTC]
Aw, again a beautiful poem! I hope to become a great poet as you when i'm older
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maplekokob In reply to kitten2554 [2007-03-13 22:58:47 +0000 UTC]
Haha. Thanks.
There is no wait. You are one now.
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kitten2554 In reply to maplekokob [2007-03-13 23:04:46 +0000 UTC]
not as good as you. I need to build up my vocabulary... Its kinda weak.
And i'm repetitant. I only speak about one subject overall. Yes, in many ways, but still one subject.
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maplekokob In reply to kitten2554 [2007-03-13 23:37:37 +0000 UTC]
I was told by my love's, brother's, girlfriend...*deep breath*...
That I am boring and repetitive. She said something like when you read one of my pieces you've read them all...
Than again, she was just trying to piss me off because I told her that about her work and it ticked her...and she tries to degrade my work because I'm younger and I am more "popular" as a writer than she is...and she holds herself in high esteem as a writer simply because of her vocabulary and grammar skills.
I don't know. Off subject.
My point is. It's cool to see different sides of things.
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kitten2554 In reply to maplekokob [2007-03-19 02:00:04 +0000 UTC]
Wow lol, mouthful much? Yea, but she shoudln't be jealous, she should just try to work harder and write from her heart, not the dictionary
But yea I like your work ^^
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kitten2554 In reply to maplekokob [2007-03-19 02:18:05 +0000 UTC]
^^ No problem
I know how you feel.. Just not the same story on jealousy.
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cthornton567 [2007-03-13 02:30:06 +0000 UTC]
i must agree (tho i havent read much of red's work, ill look into it) this is very good, very sweet and tender (again PLEAZZZZZ TEACH ME HOW TO DO THAT!!!!!) keep up the amazing work
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maplekokob In reply to cthornton567 [2007-03-13 10:35:42 +0000 UTC]
Ha. Maybe, since I've been in a journal writing stand-still lately...I'll use it to spread my knowledge of the very few things I actually understand in this life...
Like relationships...writing (with out grammar)...and how to make people smile their way through life
Yes. You have inspired me. I think that is what I'll do.
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cthornton567 In reply to maplekokob [2007-03-14 03:10:22 +0000 UTC]
well im glad that i could inspire you. it is a sign of true mastery when you can impart that knowledge on to others...and with luck ill pick up enough to write a sorta happy poem...good luck
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maplekokob In reply to cthornton567 [2007-03-14 21:25:26 +0000 UTC]
Haha. Well read my journal...the first bit "wisdom" awaits you.
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maplekokob [2007-03-13 00:52:33 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you liked. I hoped you would.
Than again your approval never surprises me...you have always been loyal, encouraging, and supportive.
Love you dear...
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szflip [2007-03-13 00:50:27 +0000 UTC]
I love you too my dear bride...always, only, and forever do I vow to be your groom. God bless you sweetheart.
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