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Published: 2007-03-13 22:39:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Her tears fall unnoticed,Forgotten in heavy rains,
Silently they soak the ground,
A hopeless fight unwinds.
She treads upon each drop,
Erasing all from time,
Her voice soon is lost,
Beneath a pain drenched lieβ¦
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maplekokob In reply to phulen [2007-03-14 21:21:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. This piece is close to me right now with all that's going on with my friends.
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kitten2554 [2007-03-13 23:06:41 +0000 UTC]
Wow.. I wish her the best. I know what it's like to have your heart broken by those you love the most. It's one of the deepest pains humanity knows
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maplekokob In reply to kitten2554 [2007-03-13 23:31:52 +0000 UTC]
Exactly. The crappy part was, the girl who her fiancee cheated one her with told me that she already knew...so I go to her to talk to her about it after class and tell her I'm sorry...and here she had no idea.
She was crushed.
I can't imagine losing someone like that...
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kitten2554 In reply to maplekokob [2007-03-19 01:58:11 +0000 UTC]
Wow...
Yea.. I do wish her the best. But though what also is a problem is people becoming jealous, telling you there cheating, you confront your other, get into an argument, and split up.. Over nothing.
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kitten2554 In reply to maplekokob [2007-03-19 02:19:05 +0000 UTC]
Sorry I'm tired.. Just got back from a LONG trip.. I really can't think today of what to respond
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