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Published: 2007-05-26 19:46:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 56; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Cry yourself to sleep,
With bitter, cold tears,
Wash away footprints,
Near toppled peers.

Forgotten in the clouds,
Unheard echoes fall,
On the mountain side,
Beneath a crimson ball.

Slip to the valleys,
Sink below the waves,
Breath in the dark,
Give your life away.

Away to the shores,
Away to the shells,
A way to Heaven's gates,
Leading you to Hell.
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Comments: 4

VelvetMaiden [2007-05-26 22:00:51 +0000 UTC]

Awww It's so sad.. The poem is really good, though. I especially like how it wraps up with one complete opposite leading into another.

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maplekokob In reply to VelvetMaiden [2007-05-27 03:51:25 +0000 UTC]

Yea. It's very paradoxical. Paradoxes are my absolute favorite literary device! So effective!

It is very sad...but, it's kinda befitting to my life right now. Not to be emo or anything...I didn't even mean to be that sad, but it came from my heart.

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VelvetMaiden In reply to maplekokob [2007-05-28 13:35:27 +0000 UTC]

*hugs tight* I hope that your heart is feeling much better.

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maplekokob In reply to VelvetMaiden [2007-05-28 15:55:07 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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