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Colored leaves tremble,Before taking the great fall,
Turning ever so erotically
Winds float them to the ground.
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Comments: 6
maplekokob In reply to CyllanPennor [2007-10-01 00:38:05 +0000 UTC]
^_^
The pic isn't mine, but I thought it fit nicely.
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KierstenViolette [2007-09-30 00:46:40 +0000 UTC]
I like this except something about the last line is bothering me. But I like the mental image and the wording otherwise.
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maplekokob In reply to KierstenViolette [2007-09-30 01:51:17 +0000 UTC]
Yea, the last line never set quite right with me...
^_^
Thanks though!
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