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The same face, the same mind,The same heart for all of time,
Weak knees, so insecure,
Bowing down to the courts,
Dull in spirit, soft in stance,
Easily swayed with a glance,
No confidence, no sense of self,
Always giving into others will,
Uniqueness, a ghost of the past,
Here they stand in a deadly trance,
One in one, they are the same,
There is no truth, a fatal name.
Wholly different, made anew,
Separate hearts gently fused,
Strongly determined we proudly stand,
Unleashing our thoughts, killing demands,
Exuberant, blunt, excited, untamed,
Firmly we hold to our claims,
Concept of self is firm in hand,
A unique identity in every strand,
Never bending to others fame,
Never giving in to others flame,
Here we dance in a lovely trance,
One in one, we are but two,
Full of truth in each name.
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Comments: 14
RJWhisper [2007-03-06 02:30:22 +0000 UTC]
this is pretty much for the win! there are so many ways this poem can be interpretted though, i can see this as a national anthem, although i don't promote donating it to that purpose. i think your original intention suits it the best ("well duh, idiot!" rjwhisper smacks herself for being stupid and stating the obvious)
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maplekokob In reply to RJWhisper [2007-03-06 21:55:26 +0000 UTC]
Haha. National anthem, interesting idea. I really never thought of it like that.
I like leaving things open for interpretation...
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maplekokob In reply to kitten2554 [2007-02-28 01:26:00 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thanks! I love your comments. They are so, wow! Gah!
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maplekokob In reply to szflip [2007-02-27 21:40:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I was thinking about the convo we had the other night about how fake couples are that never fight and always agree. How ball-less they can be.
You know my philosophy. If you agree on everything either one person isn't thinking very hard, or one person is being unreal.
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szflip In reply to maplekokob [2007-02-27 21:47:12 +0000 UTC]
Yea I know...Though sadly enough not everyone sees it that way.
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maplekokob In reply to szflip [2007-02-27 21:50:31 +0000 UTC]
Yea. We all know that "carbon copies" which can't get along with out playing along are the greatest thing to hit the mainstream of love.
Which sadly and ironically enough...was my point all along. If you can't get along with out being the same...somethings horribly wrong.
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