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maplekokob — Serenity
Published: 2007-02-21 03:53:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 639; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 1
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The gentle willow weeps,Candied petals to the ground,
Carpeted with radiance,
Adorning earthly crown,
Golden graced fairies,
Flutter to and fro,
Dripping in stardust,
A mystic, lively show,
An ancient pond glimmers,
Reflecting the magic of the land,
A portal to this dream
Please take me by the hand,
Serenity thrives,
In every drop of dew,
Beauty reaps,
In every single hue,
Breath in sweet life's nectar,
Rest your mind at ease,
Skip along in harmony,
Breath in all pleasantries.
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Comments: 21
Such beautiful wording, but extra kudos to you for the line "The gentle willow weeps", because I normally always go by the name Mourningwillow, and that is too much of a coincidence for me
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Ha...well I'm glad you could see some of yourself in my work. The first two lines or so are my favorites in the piece. I actually almost ended it after line 4.
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Well I'm glad you chose to continue it. The whole thing it quite beautiful.
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I have a poem in my gallery too, called Serenity. But it's not as good as yours!
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Ha, thanks! I'm sure it is, I'll check it out!
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Love this. Its simple, but you have some really great imagery in here too. I get this sense of like calmness and peace when I read it, just kind of laying around outside enjoying where you are and not worrying about anything except what you're going to play next. Very nice job.
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Thanks! This means a lot to me. I'm glad to hear feedback!
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I love feedback too. Great feeling, isnt it?
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cool AND nice job
PS:sorry "and"part is written in big letters
I wanted to change but it doesn't work
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Hah, it's A-OK!
Thanks for the fav!
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Sweet, its so pretty and fits the picture!! ^^ *favs*
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Aw, thanks! Your thoughts/opinions mean a lot to me!
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