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maplekokob β Shift in the Universe
Published: 2007-02-25 03:33:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 150; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Is it possible,To change the world,
With out it ever knowing,
What has been done?
Can one hide in the shadows,
And flip life upside down,
With it ever realizing
Itβs polarity?
Might one try,
To start a revolution,
Letting the Earth live on,
Believing it was stale?
Instead, will it think,
It always was?
Was the world born this way?
Or did something shiftβ¦
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youre a techie!!! yay!!! (you hate me im an actor, i cause you many problems) theater people rock! and its a great poem by the way, woderful use of questions, something that i have yet to master in poetry
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Ha. I've become question obsessed in all forms of literature...and life.
Yes, I'm a techie. Thespian in fact. I don't hate actors. They are fun to play around with on prank night. 
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oh i know! ive been the victim of many a prank (and delivered many a counter attack)
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Ha...our school took pranks to far last year...so we got grounded per say. Lets just say naked people in coffins and glitter on blow up beds were involved...
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HAHAHAHA SOUNDS AMAZING!!!!
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very powerful, i love this! it really inpires me!
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Thanks! Man...I can't believe people liked this one...I was really nervous about it.
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It's like my sub-quote says. *points to quote* Hehe
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Heh. Cool.
Oh so true.
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let me be the first to comment and say wow, I like this very much! Interesting concept, I've been wondering about the same thing for a while!
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Aw, thanks. Like I told another commenter, I almost didn't post this due to it's lack of a secure structure. I didn't want a hit squad to kill me for being so open.
I like the concept too. It came oddly, and randomly up again today when I got my hair permed for the first time. I hate changing appearance because people make a big deal...oi. From there...this deeper concept unraveled.
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Yeah, makes you wonder, how people are afraid of change, but if you introduce it without them knowing, they're happy as can be
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True...interesting idea...
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Really!?! Thanks! I almost didn't post it because it was so extremely "open" in structure I was afraid people would jump on me for not having much of a steady flow.
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pft! what ever!
i can't write ANY poetry worth 2 dead flys...it was great!
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