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VegetasLittleSister [2012-07-07 02:56:49 +0000 UTC]

Hi, I'm from #FeedbackFrenzy and I hope that you'll find my critique useful. First, her elbow seems to be shaped awkwardly, not sure how to describe the shape. Second, I love the combination of colors. They go so nicely together.

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TheAnimeArtist19 [2012-07-07 00:22:17 +0000 UTC]

here from first i'd like to say that most of the mistakes that i see are just common thing that people tackle when learning to draw. first her right elbow has a blocky shape where the bend in her arm is in real life the transition from the bottom of the bend up is quite smooth. also i noticed the folds in her clothes seem to be misplaced, and confliction with one another like her skirt has a clear flow to the right of the picture while the sleeves tend to go the wrong way. lastly the pose seems a bit awkward because it seems shes standing on one foot while waving hi to someone those motions usually dont go together making the pose seems weird. the colors looks good together and i also like the clothes they are pretty and nicely drawn the expression is clearly, the lineart is a bit sketchy and should be smoother and flowy, the hair could use a little work but overall a good picture just with common mistakes artists make
Sorry if i offend you or if im wrong,

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Anime-Maniac4121 [2012-07-05 04:04:59 +0000 UTC]

I hope you'll find my critique helpful.

I tried looking in the for the OC in the owner's deviations but couldn't find her. :\ So I can't comment on anything involving the accuracy of the portrayed character. But I can still cover the basics such as anatomy.

Speaking of which that is the single biggest problem here. Anatomy is typically one of [if not THE hardest] things to accurately portray in anime/manga characters so don't feel shot down; it happens to all of us at one point or another. Obviously anime/manga characters aren't exactly the most anatomically correct things ever, but knowing the way the real body is drawn really makes a HUGE difference.

There are things about the anatomy I could just flat out say "You did this part wrong.". But since critiques are about improving the artist's skill I will instead advise that you study anatomy heavily and then compare the real poses to what you originally thought the pose would look like. Doing so will help you realize your mistakes for yourself and will make a bigger impact than simply fixing your drawing for you.

Moving onto the clothing. I like the design of the clothes (I don't know if it's yours or SilverChaims so sorry about that) and you made her look very cute. But studying wrinkles in clothing will also help alot.

If you wanted anything else cleared up then I'll be happy to answer. So I hope my critique helped and I hope to see more of your drawing in the future.

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SilverChaim [2012-06-24 16:26:45 +0000 UTC]

This dress suits her very well! She looks so happy and cute! ^^ Good luck in the contest!

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TheSweetLemonPie [2012-06-23 18:51:37 +0000 UTC]

Awwweh!

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