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AeyraV In reply to ??? [2011-08-16 15:30:47 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!! It's so cool!

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Mareliini In reply to AeyraV [2011-08-16 17:58:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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NimbusCat In reply to ??? [2011-08-16 14:42:40 +0000 UTC]

This is coming along so well!!! I absolutely love every page of it so far... I don't think this one is bad or a scrap :)

Also I wanted to mention I love the purple trees like they are shown in the second panel... the coloring has been so great!

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Mareliini In reply to NimbusCat [2011-08-16 18:01:37 +0000 UTC]

But it is Thought sister said it's good I'm so damn perfectionist when it comes for my art.

Oh the trees (someone realized it!) I was trying to find some psychotic atmosphere with them

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Kirite In reply to ??? [2011-08-16 14:41:26 +0000 UTC]

GIN!!!!

*joins the Gin fanatic club*

OH GOSH HE LOOKS SO NIGHTMARE INDUCING IT'S AMAZING

SHRINK SHINICHI SHRINK !!

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Mareliini In reply to Kirite [2011-08-16 17:43:09 +0000 UTC]

SHRINK SHRINK SHIRNK!

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Tails232323 In reply to ??? [2011-08-16 13:48:04 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I love how you do Gin! Its scary! ;D I'm curious how you'll make it so Shinichi shrinks in the well. <:3

GRAMMAR CHECK! In the bottom of the left hand corner in that panel, You said "Ah, I don't complain" it should be, "Ah, don't complain"

<3 just trying to help with English~

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Mareliini In reply to Tails232323 [2011-08-16 17:42:47 +0000 UTC]

The well thing will happen later >:3

GRAMMR CHECK was wrong. Gin is talking to himself. He's not going to complain the thing Shinichi is stupid
But anyway, if you find some errors tell me!

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NimbusCat In reply to Tails232323 [2011-08-16 15:02:54 +0000 UTC]

Please excuse me if I'm butting in, but I think the "Ah, I don't complain" might be correct. :) The way I interpreted that speech bubble is that Gin wishes he could have 'done this' years ago, but it's easier now anyway, so he's not complaining.

But you could be correct! I do agree that for someone that knows English very well it sounds just a little strange on the tongue. Maybe the "Ah I don't complain" should even go on the end of the sentence... Well anyway I think we'll have to wait for Mareliini's word on it all, haha ;)

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Tails232323 In reply to NimbusCat [2011-08-16 23:29:22 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhhh, it was Gin talking to himself! NO WONDER, i was confused. xD Well in my case I'd fix that to "I won't complain" O3O Makes it a little more clear. Do you speak native english because if you ask me, I get a B in my english classes all the time and I'm never in advanced english. Even if I can only speak english right now, I still fail at it. >__> Stupid complicated language.

I'll keep doing this grammar check Mareliini xD just to help your english a bit. <-- trying to not sound like a know-it-all jerk.

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Mareliini In reply to NimbusCat [2011-08-16 21:47:17 +0000 UTC]

I'm stick in the way I speek in my native language ~
You were right btw.

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Mareliini In reply to Skullicit [2011-08-16 18:01:43 +0000 UTC]

Kiitosta

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Tsukiko75014 In reply to ??? [2011-08-16 12:28:40 +0000 UTC]

Gin... pfft!

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Mareliini In reply to Tsukiko75014 [2011-08-16 18:02:29 +0000 UTC]

Mutta hänhän on!
: D

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InuLoverNr1Hitomi In reply to ??? [2011-08-16 10:24:16 +0000 UTC]

I also like the last panel, btw. (Obviously) I smiled alot when I saw it!!

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InuLoverNr1Hitomi In reply to ??? [2011-08-16 10:21:55 +0000 UTC]

GIIIIIIN!!! <-- Gin fanatic (Gin's got green eyes.)
I think it looks awesome, btw!

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Mareliini In reply to InuLoverNr1Hitomi [2011-08-16 17:56:20 +0000 UTC]

Red eyes was brother's idea.
Thanks ~ <3

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InuLoverNr1Hitomi In reply to Mareliini [2011-08-16 21:01:03 +0000 UTC]

Oki!^^
And you're wellcome!

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